Question

Bitter Blow Of Love

Love, you dealt a bitter blow
You lay me across the mortal plains
bedewed, bedimmed among a show
of tearful clouds and eternal rains.

To weep at my enduring foe,
of harsh reality and searing
pains of destiny, dependable
propensity.
To fool myself repeatedly that
I could triumph over love.
(like it?)

Answer 1

poetry

Answer 2

It is good! I just wonder, were you meaning to write a poem with ABAB, CDCD, EE rhyming format? If so, the first stanza matches it, but the others do not (those could be easily fixed though!)

i like the message and how you are speaking to love directly. it's great:)

Answer 3

I like this! It's nice!