Question

Hey guys, just wondering if you could go over my paper for me and offer any suggestion about how I could make it better. I need to have this done ASAP (then i get my phone back :D :D), so it would be helpful if you would go over it for me. THANKS!

Answer 1

@AG23 @They_Call_Me_Narii @TheGaMer007 @DarkMoonZ @Owlcoffee

Answer 2

@misssunshinexxoxo @Aliypop @Teddyiswatshecallsme @jane11509 @Jadeishere @NathalyN @jamesr @uybuyvf @CaptainLlama49 @waterineyes @Vickiesweet @demonchild99

Answer 3

THANK YOU!!! <3

Answer 4

@pooja195 @rvc @Jack_Prism

Answer 5

its perfect in my opinion

Answer 6

Okay, thanks AG :) @AG23

Answer 7

np

Answer 8

same here all good.

Answer 9

@lurker @Awolflover1

Answer 10

Thanks Jam :P @jamesr

Answer 11

ye welcome

Answer 12

@mm3591

Answer 13

Well done

Answer 14

thanks darling. <3 @rvc

Answer 15

looks good to me

Answer 16

Your first line says, Martin is as influential as Muhammad, you can add was with Muhammad..
Martin is as influential as Muhammad was..
And second line, you are using "is" with Muhammad, should not you use "was" there?

Answer 17

RIGHT. okay, thanks water! You're a life saver @waterineyes

Answer 18

@DullJackel09 @animalfan1

Answer 19

I have just checked only two lines, there are 200 more. :P

Answer 20

\(I~am~here\) ;^)

Answer 21

but still. @waterineyes

Answer 22

And to all, please check her paper for Grammar more.. Point out if any grammatical mistake is there...

Answer 23

Oh, and to everyone, I'm supposed to use present tense with the verb usage in the paper. XD So that's why I used it that way, I am aware that King is dead and long gone.

Answer 24

@MrProphecyXII

Answer 25

Excellent.

Answer 26

Thanks, proph. :) @MrProphecyXII

Answer 27

No problemo

Answer 28

i do really think it was good how you added in the example of law with Hitler, it really helped you bring your point home! overall id say its fantastic!