Question

Need help with my poem!!

Answer 1

here is my poem:
It was a nice Sunny day for playing cricket
The Stadium was packed with the crowd
I was next to bat, so I walked forward anxiously,
Fearfully yet fearlessly,
And I confidently swung the bat, and bamn!
But the other side bowling team trying
to make me nervous. but I make my
self-believe very high, confidence.
And handling the pressure well

Answer 2

can someone plz look at my poem!!

Answer 3

Man dude that looks incredibly awesome.

Answer 4

ok thnx but do you wanna give me any advice where I want any change

Answer 5

Yeah sure leave me to it

Answer 6

So that I can make it more better

Answer 7

The day game for cricket could have been better
Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium
As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side
I walked forward anxiously yet without fear
And with my confidence all time high
Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy
Shouting and threatening calls of dread
Yet, to embrace the moment of execution
I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge

Answer 8

*couldn't have been

Answer 9

How do you like my rephrasing?

Answer 10

Gotta love poetry eh?

Answer 11

Just play around with "the" and change it to however you like

Answer 12

My dream come true in this day of cricket game
Amid the applaud of jam packed crowd
I, with full determination, stepped in to show
The ever lasting dread of my enemy willing to gnaw
Embracing my confidence all time high
In this day of challenge never up I give
With bat on my side, with pitcher on the other
The battle of focus between the us two
Summoning the incredulous bravery of spirit
I, with full eagle, plunge into the deed.

Answer 13

How do you make out of that one?

Answer 14

nice!!

Answer 15

I am glad my friend! Choose which ever you feel like it.

Answer 16

@Robert136 thnx a lot

Answer 17

Anytime

Answer 18

@Robert136 Iam goona choose this one because it makes more sence but the problem is that I need one more sentence for it like they are 9 sentences I need 10!!

Answer 19

For this one
The day game for cricket could have been better
Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium
As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side
I walked forward anxiously yet without fear
And with my confidence all time high
Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy
Shouting and threatening calls of dread
Yet, to embrace the moment of execution
I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge

Answer 20

To the eventual success yet to be made.

Answer 21

This is the last one.

Answer 22

Add it to the poem

Answer 23

ok

Answer 24

what be a good topic for it

Answer 25

The judgement day

Answer 26

lol I am so flashy today

Answer 27

The Judgment Day

Answer 28

Just to be clear on capitalization

Answer 29

I bet you will get A+ lol

Answer 30

so the topic be the judgement day right

Answer 31

yup

Answer 32

the last question be that how can I write a reflective journal of approximately 200 words in which you discuss the word choices you made and what effect you wanted to achieve.

Answer 33

Ok. Do you want me to give you a sample?

Answer 34

ok sure

Answer 35

Are you trying to make a poem, @MTALHAHASSAN2?

Answer 36

yes

Answer 37

I already make one

Answer 38

@Robert136 help me a lot

Answer 39

can you plz look at if you don't mind

Answer 40

@MTALHAHASSAN2 Where are you from?

Answer 41

ok

Answer 42

Pakistan

Answer 43

One hour ahead of me, ok

Answer 44

where u from

Answer 45

But I live in Canada

Answer 46

Pakistan as well, but I live in Dubai

Answer 47

Haha

Answer 48

I personally dedicate this poem as a memoir to my cricket game. Throughout the poem I ensured that each word picked carries a connotative significance. For example, the title "Judgement Day" provokes a feeling of tension as I face the adversity which stood in front of me. Moreover "packed with crowd" in the Stadium implies that I am being watched by thousands of people expecting me to perform. Amid the fear of failure I had word the poem in a risky way which may possibly come off as overly melodramatic however to those with similar experience would resonate. As such the conclusion of poem leaves a piece of foreshadowing to be done as the reader would ponder what happened after the conclusion, and such is my ambiguity and ambivalence of my poem, which will peg my memory in the board of life which now I have worked hard to keep.

Answer 49

I like to live in dubai

Answer 50

Guys take that I bet that's super duper melodramatic

Answer 51

:D

Answer 52

@Robert136 where u from