Question

I'm quite confused with this question. Can someone help? :)

Answer 1

Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:

Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.

What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence?

A longer phrase was converted to a single word.
A modifier that did not add meaning was removed.
Redundant phrases were eliminated.
Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

Answer 2

The bold is "But my father disliked hail more" and "But he hated hail more."

Answer 3

Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

Answer 4

Replaced my father with with he and also replaced disliked with hated.

Answer 5

Thank you so much :) @izuru

Answer 6

No problem!