Question

a poem. its a little bit different then my usual stuff but let me know what you think

Answer 1

The world sees an open window as an opportunity,
Someone with depressions sees it only as an obstacle.

We are what we eat,
But we eat how we feel. Empty or disgusting.

The world is your oyster.
Sometimes there’s no pearls

All the same sayings
With a bit of a twist.

It’s a matter of perspective.
And yet somehow wrong.

Because we could never understand each other
If we never were truly there.

Just because you wear the same shoes,
Doesn’t mean the foot print will be the same copy.

We are different
Yet somehow the same

Take things in the perspective of
Understanding without knowing.

We can beat each other
But we can also be a stepping stone.
Sometimes we need a crotch
In order to keep moving forward.

Answer 2

Great poem! Except, it is "Sometimes there ARE no pearls," since "pearls" is plural. :)

Answer 3

In the second to last line, you used "crotch" instead of crutch. Apart from that, this is fantastic!

Answer 4

@barbiemull thanks

Answer 5

@geneticrockhopper247 thanks