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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Can someone tell me how to change "sustained" in this following sentence: The study also found that, in 2014, teens affected by TBI while playing sports were twice as likely to consume energy drinks then teens affected by TBI sustained from other injuries.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@mathmate

OpenStudy (zaraxx):

do u just want another word for "sustained"?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yes

OpenStudy (zaraxx):

"caused" could work

OpenStudy (zaraxx):

but you'd probably want to say "caused by"

OpenStudy (anonymous):

but... I think I found a way to reformulate it. How about: "caused by other injuries"... Oh, well, you said it @zaraxx

OpenStudy (zaraxx):

haha nice job

OpenStudy (mathmate):

This is an article from yesterday: "Teens who reported having a traumatic brain injury in the past year were seven times more likely to have consumed at least five energy drinks in the past week than those teens with no history of traumatic brain injury, according to a new study." this means that TBI may not be caused by other injuries. Source: http://www.ctvnews.ca/health/study-finds-link-between-energy-drinks-traumatic-brain-injury-in-teens-1.2566157

OpenStudy (anonymous):

that's exactly what I am writing about XD

OpenStudy (mathmate):

You seem to have different information! Perhaps a little research to clear that up before actually writing.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Not really... It says it pretty much word per word...

OpenStudy (mathmate):

But the article I quoted is not comparing the right thing, with drinks and without history of TBI, so they are not mutually exclusive.

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