Question

Okay I have an idea. Let's make our own lyrics. Everybody just comment the next line in the song that would fit the beat. Go wherever you want with this! Just have fun with it! Okay, who wants to start?

I'm thinking for the chorus we should use these lines from below:

Wish I had something to hold onto, It hurts so bad to love you.
Days have gone by, but I don’t have a clue.
Don’t know why, don’t know when, but I can’t stop now
If I did, I know that I, I would break down.
Time with you. Is time enough for now?

Here is an updated list of all the lyrics from below thus far.

The rope of life keeps slipping,
My tear soaked face is dripping,
There’s a switch inside me, flipping.
But I won’t give up on it.
I am not ready to, yet.
But sometimes it's easier to let go
But even then, I shouldn't, I know.
I must tell myself to just hold on a little longer.
I know it's hard, but each day I'll get stronger.
Happiness is a long ways away, but feels like it's almost here by the end of the day
Wish I had something to hold onto, It hurts so bad to love you.
Days have gone by, but I don’t have a clue.
Don’t know why, don’t know when, but I can’t stop now
If I did, I know that I, I would break down.
Time with you. Is time enough for now?

Still trying to stop this, but I don't know how

Contributors:
TayTay23, Xbeast, Bellarave, teresar7, senia01, Peach3113, GracieBugg, and quin100.

Answer 1

The rope of life keeps slipping

Answer 2

my tear soaked face is dripping

Answer 3

theres a switch inside me, flipping.

Answer 4

but i wont give up on it

Answer 5

I am not ready to, yet.

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but sometimes it's easier to let go

Answer 7

But even then, I shouldn't, I know.

Answer 8

I must tell myself to just hold on a little longer.

Answer 9

I know it's hard, but each day I'll get stronger.

Answer 10

happiness is a long ways away, but feels like it's almost here by the end of the day

Answer 11

Wish I had something to hold onto, It hurts to love you.

Answer 12

Days have gone by, but I've still got no clue.

Answer 13

Dont know why, dont know when, but I cant stop now.

Answer 14

If I did, I know that I, I would break down.

Answer 15

Sounds like a sad song. xD

Answer 16

It does. XD

Answer 17

*whispers* (I am almost crying btw) It coming along really well

Answer 18

XD Yeah

Answer 19

so wejust add a line?

Answer 20

add as much as you like!

Answer 21

time with u is time enough or now

Answer 22

for*

Answer 23

that song i heard it before my cousin made a really similar one

Answer 24

song is looking great.

Answer 25

hello

Answer 26

whats up

Answer 27

so where did it leave off, i would like to add

Answer 28

look at the lyrics re written in the question box

Answer 29

Something sorta like "Still Trying to stop this, But I don't know how"

Answer 30

But Yeah, It's coming along, Y'all are all great song writers.

Answer 31

i would say dont step on the bug LOL

Answer 32

Please, refer to the following post:


http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/554bb631e4b08c324fbe2a0d



These are lyrics without any musical nomenclature or representation, no rythmical indication or melodic composition, which makes it but a plain draft for lyrics more fit for the writing section.

Answer 33

@Owlcoffee I'm sorry, but I don't get how you think you can come in here and dictate our right to creating lyrics. I can't help that you can't create a melody on your own. That's the beauty of it. Everyone has a different way of singing it. And what exactly makes you think that someone interested in reading music lyrics would go to the writing section? If you don't like the post, don't click on it. Problem solved

Answer 34

@THC_gamer4life The most recent lyrics are posted in the question box, with the contributors.

Answer 35

here. i did changes for it. what do you think?

The ropes of life is rippin
my tear soaked face is drippin
there's a switch inside me flippin
all around
walk down the street you're trippin
from the words ppl say as you're walkin
everybody's searchin
for a little fun

Hold your head up high
look up to the sky… and

Never give up on your dreams
life is better than it seems
have a little faith
it’ll be ok
find some hope and hold it close
keep it tight don’t let it go
keep an open mind
everything is fine
in this broken life

Turn on the news and all you hear
is death or pain that’s in the air
nothing about love or peace on here
where have it gone?
fights and riots all around
all i hear is the sound
of gunshots, screaming all around
it’s the same thing


Hold your head up high
look up to the sky… and

Never give up on your dreams
life is better than it seems
have a little faith
it’ll be ok
find some hope and hold it close
keep it tight don’t let it go
keep an open mind
everything is fine

Answer 36

The answer to your useless speech is quite simple, read the rules and make sure the post follows them, and no, I am not dictating anything, I am trying to notify that this is more fit for the writing section since the melodic contour or form has not been provided.

TayTay23, keep your assertions for yourself and yes, it becomes a problem when only incomplete "songs" are posted when people who legitimately need help with music theory get lost in all these. Do you see my problem now or should I make it clearer?

Answer 37

if this is wrong to be posted then almost every post on the music class is all doing wrong. a lot of people do this.

Answer 38

I know @teresar7 I'm just gonna ignore people like that. It doesn't matter what you do, someone on this planet will oppose it. That's just what I've learned. You can't fight forever, so just ignore em

Answer 39

And @teresar7 I totally like what you've done to the song ;)

Answer 40

A sad, sad serenade..

I like what you did, @teresar7.
But instead of using contractions, you can write two single words. Like in the last verse, rather than writing --
"have a little faith
it’ll be ok"

you can write --
"have a little faith
it will be okay"

However, for a poem, your version is nice

Answer 41

It was real good. You guys did great

Answer 42

thanks guys. idk it just came to my mind like that but good idea @secret66

Answer 43

Thats the dumbest pellet i ever read.

Answer 44

pellet

Answer 45

please be respectful as you give your opinion.

Answer 46

flutter u

Answer 47

mm