Question

What would be a good conclusion paragraph for this paragraph? Medal! XD

Answer 1

I chose to search articles and advertisements for clothing in this lesson. I think that advertisements aimed to teenage girls and women in clothing are more effective than men because teen girls have a billion dollar a year industry directed toward getting them to buy clothes. And it seems to be working... or it would not exist. Advertising has been promoted a young set of women- that they should stay in the latest fashion trend. Now it is ethical to bombard a “child” with a ton of ads, but in some stances yes, it does sometimes get the older people to buy the items too that they want you to in the clothing industry. It keeps the money flowing. For example, a clothing ad would be Forever 21. Forever 21 has clothing for men and women, but the gender that buys mostly from that store are teen girls and women because before the store had anything to do with men's clothing, it was all about women's clothing. Advertising has been promoted a young set of women- that they should stay in the latest fashion trend. Their ads bring in any race and ethnicity, so you can say they seem to say,”Welcome everyone.” The ads for Forever 21 don't have a particular type of social status. Like I said before they welcome everyone. I think the ad alone doesn't just make the people go buy clothing from there, but also the type of clothing they have and the vibe of the store.

Answer 2

@katy1563

Answer 3

@sammyalabamy @jovanny21

Answer 4

@Teddyiswatshecallsme

Answer 5

What kind of essay are you writing?

Answer 6

its about ads

Answer 7

but my teacher said that the onclusion paragraph should sound something like the beginning of the paragraph up there, not any new info and it needs to be a paragraph :/ so yea lol i dont know how to make it sound like it hahah

Answer 8

Yeah, but like, is it informative, persuasive, argumentative?

Answer 9

Oh. Well, just rephrase all of your main points and your thesis statement.

Answer 10

she didnt say :/ i really dont like my teacher lol

Answer 11

Then that will be your conclusion paragraph.

Answer 12

Me neither.

Answer 13

So the beginning of the conclusion would be something like, "In conclusion, advertisements directed towards women's fashion are more effective then advertisements in men's fashion." That's basically what you're stating. Now what do you mean by more effective? More effective at accumulating revenue or? Something else perhaps?

Answer 14

idk cuz women go shopping more than men?

Answer 15

How do you know that exactly? What are your sources?

Answer 16

um the web lol

Answer 17

But effective to what though? Like how is it being effective? I don't understand.

Answer 18

i dont understand either

Answer 19

-.e You need to cite your sources. :P I mean, this sounds like an opinionated essay which is fine if it isn't being treated like an essay or something but if you making statements like these i'm pretty sure you'd need a work-cited page with your sources.

Answer 20

waahahahahahah :/ ryan pweez helpppppppppp

Answer 21

and no i dont want the answers!

Answer 22

I am helping. I told you how to begin your Conclusion. You're gonna basically just restate your thesis statement and all of your main points made throughout the paragraph. That's it. Nothing more too it what else direction do you need?

Answer 23

fiiiiiiiinnnnneneeeeee

Answer 24

HEY i shop as much as women

Answer 25

lol ok

Answer 26

Perhaps, but you sir, are not the majority of males.

Answer 27

ture dat 3:

Answer 28

i sob a lot

Answer 29

3:

Answer 30

lol

Answer 31

@iloveyou;*

Answer 32

yup?

Answer 33

hi thought you were offline :3

Answer 34

lol no can you help? pweez

Answer 35

i can try

Answer 36

thnx :) lol

Answer 37

wats your guest

Answer 38

nvm lol i got it :D

Answer 39

thnx :)

Answer 40

was it my pickachu did you look him in the eyes

Answer 41

lol no

Answer 42

hi

Answer 43

how you doing

Answer 44

um good? lol

Answer 45

ok thats good right

Answer 46

what happens when your angry >:P

Answer 47

do you shoot lighting bolts out of your head like pickahu

Answer 48

lol no

Answer 49

then what do you do

Answer 50

do you go super saying times 4 like goku

Answer 51

lol idk about anime lol all ik is pikachu hahah

Answer 52

oh

Answer 53

yea lol

Answer 54

darn

Answer 55

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