Question

anyone good in help writing an argumentative essay

Answer 1

What is the topic?

Answer 2

Hello?

Answer 3

society and the pressure on teens to be perfect i need help on the counter claim

Answer 4

@Jack_Prism yea so help me?

Answer 5

Ok so im supposed to compose a counter claim to Society peer pressure

Answer 6

yesh please

Answer 7

ok give me a second

Answer 8

There isnʻt much of a counter claim there. Society does have some peer pressure on teens to be perfect. Donʻt take drugs. Donʻt smoke. Get Aʻs.

But I think a counter claim is that society isnʻt trying to make them perfect, or pressuring them. But guiding them towards a better future

Answer 9

Just some thoughts

Answer 10

true but like i was thinking like you should be like this size and tall and have these types of clothes things like that

Answer 11

Well right there you can create a counter example with any group that is a minority such as indian familys or Japenese familys which put massive amounts of pressure on the kids to be perfect and if they arent then they are considered failures

Answer 12

Jack I wouldnʻt bring a race into this. They said teenagers, we have to be general in our argument.

Answer 13

Im not at all, I am bringing different types of society into this, this has nothing to do with race

Answer 14

Diamond I like that. You can talk about looks, academics, and then something else. The three points of your thesis

Answer 15

merp i like both ideas i dont know grrr.....

Answer 16

Btw your "counter example" agrees with the prompt. It has to disagree with it...

Answer 17

That would make it a counter to it

Answer 18

Diamond you can use the indian society, with their traditional clothing

Answer 19

The prompt talks about society and pressure on teens to be perfect. So does your talk of indians being pressured into being perfect or they become a failure. It agrees with the prompt...

Answer 20

That is what i said

Answer 21

But if you want a counter example you could use americans and the lax expectations of their kids

Answer 22

umm okay i dont know how i would put that into it?

Answer 23

I would talk about

Academics
Clothing
Social status

In academics, you can talk about how parents arenʻt pressuring them to be perfect in that area, but guiding them so that they can succeed in life.

For clothing, you can talk about societyʻs ever-changing standards about looks, and how in society nowadays, itʻs not about being perfect, but fitting in with the pack.

Social status will follow a similar argument, like the friends you hang out with. Parents sometimes want them to be perfect people, aspiring for greatness that your parents want for you as well. But really, your counter claim is that society is accepting friends now, that are just your friends. You found someone with similar values and interests, and bam. They arenʻt perfect, but they donʻt need to be.

Just some thoughts

Answer 24

Iʻve given myself up for a couple hours and straight out helped people write their essays, but Iʻm afraid I donʻt have that time rn. Goodluck @diamondclark

Remember

Introduction
-Hook
-Thesis

First Body Paragraph
-First Thesis Point

Second Body Paragraph
-Second Thesis Point

Third Body Paragraph
-Third Thesis Point

Conclusion
-Do not start the paragraph off by saying "In conclusion"
-Have your thesis in here
-Try to kinda sum up all the stuff you talked about

Answer 25

thanks so much guys