Question

I got that good game
but I a good girl
I'm a hood girl
But i ain't been to the hood tho
I spitting fire
I'm spitting bars
Can't hold this fire
Gotta spread the flame
And them bad boys
Be like "woah girl"
But the way I be
I'm a good girl
I don't mess with boys
Only break their hearts
Leaving them hanging
Too busy playing with rap pellet
But you can't really be mad tho
Cause I still impressing them bad bros
Still breaking them good hearts
And leave them being mad tho

Answer 1

nice start is it rap?

Answer 2

:) Great

Answer 3

very gewd

Answer 4

good

Answer 5

its pretty good, i would change the "But i ain't been to the hood tho" to something else because it confuses the listener/reader. other than that, Good Job!

Answer 6

No, I'm sorry, but all of these well meaning individuals are misleading you. This is, in fact, not very good.

The rhyming structure is choppy. The rhythm is incomplete. And don't even get me started on the grammatical errors. Maybe that's sound you're going for but I assure you it's erroneous nature is not appealing to those who have any sort of background in musical theory and structure.

Answer 7

^ I agree

Answer 8

Uhhh rap wack

Answer 9

Please, refer to the following post:

http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/554bb631e4b08c324fbe2a0d


These are lyrics without any musical nomenclature or representation, no rythmical indication or melodic composition, which makes it but a plain draft for lyrics more fit for the writing section.

Answer 10

No

Answer 11

i think my ears are bleeding -_-

Answer 12

nice good rap