Question

Help please:
Correct the following paragraph:
"I choose Petroleum Engineering field because I believe that much reservoir God has given us to serve humanity and get benefit from them and it's my passion to discover this God’s given blessing. The oil crisis never decreases my motivation. My motivation is always to high to serve humanity through my field."

Answer 1

@Bookworm14

Answer 2

@Whitemonsterbunny17 @TheSmartOne can you help him please? english is not my strong suite

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@Bookworm14 thanks bookworm :) though i didn't get response yet ;P

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@unicornsandmarshmellows

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okidoke ima try my best

Answer 6

thanks :)

Answer 7

wait are we just fixing the grammatical errors here?

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you help as this is written by an english native speaker with no grammatic mistakes

Answer 9

? still kinda confused i don't think i can help her man @RCCB are you good in english?

Answer 10

are'nt you native english?

Answer 11

No i am but im having a trouble understanding what the assignment is for you

Answer 12

Like what do you want me to fix because I think it looks fine with the side of a few grammar errors

Answer 13

actually its an essay i got stucked on this sentence i want it to be correct by grammer and by general

Answer 14

oh okidoke !
I choose Petroleum Engineering field because I believe that much reservoir God has given us to serve humanity and get benefit from them. This is because its passion to discover this God’s given blessing. As well as this,the oil crisis never decreases my motivation which is to always to serve the humanity through my field.

some parts of the paragraph is a little weird so im not sure your point of the writing all that much however that is what i suggest you put, fixing grammatical mistakes

Answer 15

or at least some of them :)
that good?

Answer 16

Thanks @unicornsandmarshmellows but what do you think an other word can be used instead of "decrease"(my motivatoin)

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weeeeel you can use "cutback", like "it made me cutback in my motivation" , or "constriction", like "it constricted my motivation" :)

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that all?

Answer 19

hmmm i dont know ;P

Answer 20

haha okidoke message me if you have more questions ! :)

Answer 21

thanks for this help

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@PokemonFan40

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here

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sorry i do not know

Answer 25

yes, and can you also tell me when you write an essay do you get help from net for count the words?

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@RCCB do you know?

Answer 27

@Deadly_Roses is more likely to know than me

Answer 28

uhm please help me i've 2 hours only to submit the esay

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she will know better than me* and @leahhhmorgannn im not entirely sure im sorry

Answer 30

its okay and thanks :)