Question

Can any1 let me know if this is good?

Death
Death is a road
I wish I hadn’t found
I didn’t know
How I was needed to stay around
I lost my family
The love of my life
My heart was torn
People wanted me alive
I didn’t know
What I had done
Now all I can do
Is watch them run
Away from themselves
Away from death scythe
Away from their life
my poetry.....

Answer 1

its pretty good dude.

Answer 2

really good actually.

Answer 3

@Abstract_Undercover
@Lexi_Loves
@Hayhayz
@Carpe_Diem77
@Englishguy
@Mitchi35

Answer 4

but (sorry), there is a grammar prob in the fourteenth line dude, "Away from death scythe," i think it should be, "Away from death's scyte."

Answer 5

It looks fine to me!

Answer 6

its cool first time i put up poetry carpe inspired me to go for it!

Answer 7

thx lexi

Answer 8

my other one is...:

Tears

These tears in my eyes,
Running down my cheeks,
Have been rolling for weeks.
The pain in my heart,
Was felt from the start,
I know that we’ll never be,
But how I so wish we could be.
But we live two worlds apart,
I know I’ll only end up with a broken heart.
I knew this from the start.

Answer 9

why dont u go on wattpad and ask where all the other bloggers are??

Answer 10

hm..

Answer 11

@dak1d