Read the following statement. We learn more from our failures than from our successes. Write a persuasive paragraph in which you agree or disagree with the statement. State your opinion and support it with reasoning. Use language that will appeal to your readers' reason and emotions.
Firstly, do you agree or disagree with that statement because someone around here can't make that decision for you. State where you stand and then maybe someone would be able to help you with a persuasive paragraph.
Yes, I do agree with the statement. I agree with this statement because when learning from your failure you know what not to do.
Yes, I do concur with this factual statement. I concede with this statement because when learning from your lives failure you know what not to do to gain your success.
Thats perfect, now the next step is to appeal to your readers emotion. What if we reworded it like this... "I deeply agree that we learn more from our failures than our successes. Why? Because success has a way of shaping our own world and our own authority to the point of allowing our ego's get in the away of learning anything. We learn from failure and from mistakes because its our general guide to living life. Failure is the manual to us stumbling and falling. It is the base of all our flaws. It is the determination to start over and anew again. In a way, it is the road to success. You cannot be successful without failing first." Don't copy ME word for word, but I have given some input and a few ideas for you to incorporate.
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I gotta another Q: In "All Together Now," Barbara Jordan believes that children learn "ideas and attitudes" from "the adults who nurture them." In an essay, explain what Jordan believes children should learn from their parents and teachers in order to create a harmonious society. Do you agree with her? Are there other lessons and qualities that you think children should learn from adults? How would these lessons help create a harmonious society? Use the reading selection to help you answer the question. @Atsie
Well, firstly DO you agree with her?
Yes
@Atsie
Alright, I'll jot a few ideas for you to incorporate and to maybe get you thinking. Children should learn respect and manners from their parents. Both of these elements are key to a harmonious society, or they should be at least. Parents need to understand the balance between love and discipline in regards to raising their children, because if one is more than the other its going to detrimental to the process. When children are guided and raised with these things in a correct fashion, not only do they know how to conduct themselves in society but in turn more than likely they will teach their own children these things so that way generations can thrive upon the same base and understanding.
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