Question

Poetry I wrote last night:

Answer 1

She walks the hallways unaware of her beauty
She thinks no one notices but me
Instead of confidence, her head hangs low
the hurtful words they've called her, never go
Why? Can they not see?
She's human just like them, how cruel can they be?
You slut, you whore, you need to go on a diet
the words play in her head, and she thinks she's a mistake
the can't understand they're leading her to her fate
She comes to me crying, but contains a fake smile
this beautiful girl... will only last for a while.

Answer 2

(P.S ~ Sorry about the language)

Answer 3

I really like it, and being able to relate to that kind of situation makes it seem even better to me.

Answer 4

Thanks, and things will get better. =)

Answer 5

Your welcome. And thank you I know it will get better too.

Answer 6

Thanks.

Answer 7

wow that is amazing

Answer 8

*claps and wipes a tear*

Answer 9

Awesome ;)

Answer 10

AWESOME! I SUCK AT POETRY

Answer 11

:(

Answer 12

It just takes practice Joann. :D

Answer 13

Very lit Logan :P