Question

Can someone please help me with my thesis statement?

Answer 1

Here is what I have so far.
In the novel Ender’s Game by Orson Scott Card the main human rights issue is dehumanization, Ender and Valentine dehumanize their enemy much like soldiers do now, the government dehumanizes children and only sees them as tools at their disposal much like people in the real world with abortion, the government in the novel decides how many children you can have what religion you are they take away your basic right to decide things for yourself much like adults do to the child brides in South Sudan.

Answer 2

I just want to know if what i wrote is correct it feels too long and I don't know if I approached the assignment correctly

Answer 3

I think it sounds Good! Not too long in my opinion.

Answer 4

Thank you

Answer 5

Um the thesis statement is kind of a run-on sentence, where are the periods? Overall though, you seem to have did a pretty good job.