Question

After reading this chapter I can honestly say that I can differentiate creative thinking and critical thinking. For example, if I desired to choose on a different major, considering all the information, also getting a strong understanding of the major would be considered critical thinking because I am making a smart decision based on the results. Creative thinking on the other hand would be me studying for a test and finding a unique, new way to study the material. I’ve learned that Voices of criticism is a way of demolishing your self-confidence. A long lasting consequence that makes me doubt

Answer 1

myself in my everyday life.

Answer 2

I NEED TO FIX ALL OF THE GRAMMAR MISTAKE IS THIS SCENTENCE ABOVE .. please help as much as possible. ^^^^^

Answer 3

Okay, I can help.
Let's break it down, sentence by sentence.

So, for your first sentence;
"After reading this chapter I can honestly say that I can differentiate creative thinking and critical thinking."
You need to add a comma after the word "chapter." This is because a comma represents a pause, and you would need to pause after saying the word "chapter."
Does that make sense so far?

Answer 4

yes

Answer 5

Okay, good.

Next sentence:
"For example, if I desired to choose on a different major, considering all the information, also getting a strong understanding of the major would be considered critical thinking because I am making a smart decision based on the results."
This sentence looks good, but I would remove the word "also," as it causes some confusion in your sentence. Otherwise, this sentence looks just fine.

Answer 6

ok thanks

Answer 7

Next sentence:
"Creative thinking on the other hand would be me studying for a test and finding a unique, new way to study the material."
Reverse "Creative thinking" and "on the other hand" then add a comma after "hand"

Like so:
"On the other hand, creative thinking would be me studying for a test and finding a unique, new way to study the material."
^
This sentence is correct.

Answer 8

Making sense so far?

Answer 9

yes i think i'm understanding. ok just to make sure i out commas when there is a pause in the sentence?

Answer 10

Yes, that's correct.

For your last sentence, I would reword some things:
"I’ve learned that Voices of criticism is a way of demolishing your self-confidence. A long lasting consequence that makes me doubt myself in everyday life."

Here's one way to reword this:
"I've learned that the voices of criticism can really demolish your self-confidence. This is a long-lasting consequence that makes me doubt myself in everyday life."

Answer 11

i like the way you reworded it . thanks so much i really appreciate your feed back.

Answer 12

You're welcome! If you need help with anything else, just let me know! I'm glad I could help. :)

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