Question

Hello I would really like some help with this.. I'll medal


What is the best way to revise these sentences to add variety in sentence structure?

The youth orchestra is very good. The musicians are all outstanding. They play a wide range of classical music. These pieces are very challenging.

There are fifty very good and outstanding musicians in the youth orchestra. They play a wide range of challenging pieces.
Fifty outstanding musicians are very good. They play in the youth orchestra. They need these skills to play challenging music.

Answer 1

"There are fifty very good and outstanding musicians in the youth orchestra. They play a wide range of challenging pieces" would be the best.

This is the original correct?---> "The youth orchestra is very good. The musicians are all outstanding. They play a wide range of classical music. These pieces are very challenging."

Answer 2

This is the original

The youth orchestra is very good. The musicians are all outstanding. They play a wide range of classical music. These pieces are very challenging.

These are the choices
There are fifty very good and outstanding musicians in the youth orchestra. They play a wide range of challenging pieces.
Fifty outstanding musicians are very good. They play in the youth orchestra. They need these skills to play challenging music.
The fifty outstanding musicians who make up the youth orchestra play a wide range of challenging classical music.
The youth orchestra, with fifty musicians, all very good, plays a wide range of classical music, all of which are challenging.

Answer 3

@knivesnpens

Answer 4

okay the best one is this one for sure: "The fifty outstanding musicians who make up the youth orchestra play a wide range of challenging classical music." This one implements all the sentences into one in a smooth, orderly fashion. It makes perfect sense as well.

Thanks for clarifying the choices. :D

Answer 5

Thank you!!!!

Answer 6

@dranz10 no problem