Question

Can you review this poem?

Answer 1

The Carnal Gentleman

Gentle yet animalistic
his tendencies lie
Ideas are narcissistic
And yet they still thrive

Perfect in looks
Yet Carnal in thought
The gentleman took
It was all for nought

His emotions were gray
And whatever he says
Is hollow and dead
His heart is black with a hint of red

But the red is worse than the monster he is
For it consumes the emotions of all around
To damage to burn and to destroy,
the Carnal Gentleman enjoys

For monsters may run and people may hide
but the emotions inside
Are always there
To destroy and create while
the Carnal Gentleman waits. :)

Answer 2

I love the poem, it is really good.

Answer 3

Thank you is there anything I should change i.e. Rhyme scheme or some words

Answer 4

I think it's wonderfully done! No change needs to be done from my perspective!

Answer 5

Can you classify it to a genre and give it a theme? @LoveIt

Answer 6

I'm not @ LoveIt, but I personally find it in a maybe mild horror genre. As for the theme, it could be have a few examples. One would be that not everything is as it looks. It's just a basic guess, not entirely sure with the theme !

Answer 7

The genre is in between horror and mystery.

Answer 8

lol this is so good @MR.COOLIO!!!
The genre for me is maybe sad and mysterious XD

Answer 9

Awww thanks I hoped people would like it (btw fishing for compliments) don't be afraid to give criticism

Answer 10

you too @nampa feel free to comment :)

Answer 11

lol No problem :)
I have no criticism XD It's a work of art lol

Answer 12

It's actually a good piece of poetry :-)
Same as Daniee, I have no criticism !

Answer 13

Great poem man keep writing maybe one day you can submit a manuscript http://corporate.harpercollins.com/us/for-authors/submit-a-manuscript

Answer 14

awesome! So much detail!

Answer 15

@DogzCatz how would submitting a manuscript for poems work?

Answer 16

This poem doesn't involve break-ups, so 10/10

Answer 17

Awesome!

Answer 18

i love this poem soo much@MR.COOLIO