Question

grammar check plz

Answer 1

There are so many reason in behind of people attend colleges or universities. I think the most common reason be to get a higher education for a better job but some people also attend colleges or universities only to get more friends and to gain new experience.
Firstly, as we all know the significant of education especially now a days, it's pretty much important for every career particularly if you are looking for a great job then you must need to attend colleges or universities for the higher education to get a better job in the future. Furthermore, as technology advances all over the world, more and more education is required of people.
Second, some people likes to attend colleges or universities only because to get more friend and to increase their interaction with people. They may also likes to live in university or college and have a habit of meeting new people each day who have similar interests with themselves.
Lastly, some people attend colleges or universities to gain new experience and would like to know how the colleges or universities system works. So basically, they want to gain more experience so that can help them with their future job and also as you know the experience is the main pillar of getting a job now a days.
In conclusion, people attend colleges or universities for different reason it could be for getting higher education, making friends and gaining new experience for their future job. I will say the university and college is a right place to go then.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

Corrections to be made:

First paragraph, first sentence:
"There are so many reason in behind of people attend colleges or universities."

Things to fix: Change "reason" to "reasons" also, "in behind of people" needs to be reworded to something like "why people attend."

Possible complete correction:
"There are so many reasons as to why people attend colleges or universities."

Answer 4

First paragraph, second sentence:

"I think the most common reason be to get a higher education for a better job but some people also attend colleges or universities only to get more friends and to gain new experience. "

Things to fix:
"reason be to get" - reword this to something like "reasons is to get"
"but some people" - start a new sentence here, remove the word "but" and change it to "Some."
"only to get more friends" - remove "only"

Possible complete correction:

"I think the most common reason is to get a higher education for a better job. Some people also attend colleges or universities to get more friends and gain new experience.

Answer 5

Second paragraph corrections to make:

First sentence:

"Firstly, as we all know the significant of education especially now a days, it's pretty much important for every career particularly if you are looking for a great job then you must need to attend colleges or universities for the higher education to get a better job in the future."

Things to correct:
"the significant"- wrong version of this word, use "significance" instead.
"now a days" - this is one word "nowadays."
"it's pretty much" - get rid of this, change it to "it is."
"for every career particularly" - add a comma after "career," then change "particularly" to "especially."
"then you must need to"- start a new sentence, get rid of "then" change "must" to "will."

Possible completed correction:
"Firstly, as we all know the significance of education especially nowadays, it is important for every career, especially if you are looking for a great job. You will need to attend colleges or universities for the higher education that you need in order to get a better job in the future. "

Answer 6

Your last sentence of the second paragraph is fine the way it is. Good work.

Answer 7

Third paragraph corrections to make:

Third paragraph, first sentence:
"Second, some people likes to attend colleges or universities only because to get more friend and to increase their interaction with people.

Corrections:
"likes"- change to "like"
"only because to get more"- reword to something like "just because they want to get more"
"friend"- you want the plural version, which is "friends."
"to"- remove, as it isn't necessary.

Second sentence:

"They may also likes to live in university or college and have a habit of meeting new people each day who have similar interests with themselves."

Corrections:
"likes"- change to "like"
"in university"- change to "at the university"
"have a habit of meeting" - change to "be able to meet"
"with"- change to "as"

Possible complete correction:
"Second, some people like to attend colleges or universities just because they want to get more friends and increase their interaction with people. They may also like to live at the university or college and be able to meeting new people each day who have similar interests as themselves."

Answer 8

Fourth paragraph:

First sentence:

"Lastly, some people attend colleges or universities to gain new experience and would like to know how the colleges or universities system works."

Corrections to make:
"and would like to know how" - change to "and to find out how"
"colleges or universities system works"- add punctuation to "colleges" and "universities" and make "system" plural.
"works"- make this singular.

Second sentence:
"So basically, they want to gain more experience so that can help them with their future job and also as you know the experience is the main pillar of getting a job now a days."

Corrections to make:
"So basically,"- remove this, it's not necessary.
"so that can help them" - get rid of "so."
"and also as you know the experience"- get rid of "and also as you know," change to "because"
"now a days"- this is one word.

Possible complete correction:
"Lastly, some people attend colleges or universities to gain new experience and to find out how the college's or university's systems work. They want to gain more experience that can help them with their future job because the experience is the main pillar of getting a job nowadays."

Answer 9

Last paragraph corrections to make:

First sentence:
"In conclusion, people attend colleges or universities for different reason it could be for getting higher education, making friends and gaining new experience for their future job."

Things to fix:
"for different reason it could be for"- change to "for many different reasons, such as"
"getting higher"- add "a" after "getting"
"making friends and"- add a comma after "friends"

Second sentence:
"I will say the university and college is a right place to go then."

Things to fix:
"I will say the"- remove as it isn't necessary.
"is a right place"- change "a" to "the"
"to go then"- remove "then" and add "for them" before "to go."


Possible complete correction:

"In conclusion, people attend colleges or universities for many different reasons, such as getting a higher education, making friends, and gaining new experience for their future job. University and college is the right place for them to go."

Answer 10

That's all of it, I hope it all makes sense and helps.

Answer 11

@Irrati0nal great work bro I appreciated

Answer 12

No problem man, let me know if you need anything else.