Question

Check out my new poem...


Can't I just have an And?
It always have to be Or?
My wishes are pillers of sand,
never getting the And,
always getting the Or.
I had And once,
Made me look like a dunce.
It made the Or mean more,
then it did before.
I'm back to Or,
I'm not mad anymore,
I've had my And,
made my sand piller crumble.
Not mumbling why I can't have an And.
Cause Ors' make you see
what others cannot see.
Ors' are blessings.
Ands' are trouble.

Answer 1

I dont think it is that good. Just something I wrote down.

Answer 2

i really like it!! it's really creative :D

Answer 3

Thank you @briannaontimeforreal

Answer 4

@likeabossssssss

Answer 5

Exactly how I feel sometimes!!! Good job!

Answer 6

Thx @joannThomas

Answer 7

It has a really good ending, makes it memorable. I like the whole "And/Or" theme. It does a really good job at portraying how life is all about choices, and "And" is not always one of them. There are some grammatical things you could fix, such as changing "then" to "than," and I know what you mean by the second line, but I mean if we were getting technical . . . :p I like it alot though, nice job (:

Answer 8

thx @kelsey.benton00

Answer 9

lovely *-*