Question

feedback plz it was my first poem

Answer 1

I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
The first thing I saw from my eye was you.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Since then I realized you'll love me despite
of any trouble that comes in your way.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.

With you telling me every morning it was all right.
Taking care of me whole day, while you’re at work.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Since then our love have taken deep flight.
so high like a rocket reaching towards the sky.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.

I remember the first time you taught me to write.
Taking care of me while you are working whole day.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

You treating me like the flying kite,
Generous, kind and not getting angry for what I do.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Answer 2

i reposted this cause i didnt get much feedback last time

Answer 3

I love it @SkyVoltage keep up the good work

Answer 4

tag your friends

Answer 5

k

Answer 6

@ScarlettFarra2000

Answer 7

@dopeness_

Answer 8

@Aleah54

Answer 9

@NyeMc

Answer 10

It's a very powerful poem kind of makes me want to cry. It's wonderful you should try and write more poems your really good at them

Answer 11

Its good i like it, and i agree you should write more poems.

Answer 12

this is a truly well written poem....

Answer 13

thank you if you guys like it dont forget to leave a medal

Answer 14

Nice work

Answer 15

I LOVE IT... sorry i love it

Answer 16

Good job hun! It grabbed my heart like the first time i read it! Keep up the good work!

Answer 17

lol thanks babe

Answer 18

tag your friends plz

Answer 19

AMAZING! <3 Keep up your hard work! :)

Answer 20

REALLY GOOD MAN

Answer 21

THANK YOU

Answer 22

This is an amazing poem! If you can turn it into a song or have a friend who could it would sound amazing! The words in this would make great song lyrics! You are a natural writer and keep doing it because you are amazing!

Answer 23

thanks i might do you have anyone one in mind who could @reptibelle

Answer 24

hmmmmm.... let me think.

Answer 25

Woah! This is really good @SkyVoltage.... I really like how you could really feel it! So strongly and well written! Good job. Keep up the good work!

Answer 26

I feel like it can be a very good poem, it doesn't rhyme like the poems I'm used to. (Yes I'm aware not all forms of poetry do.) But it has potential. :]

Answer 27

This is really good i like it. I think you did a good job.

Answer 28

hey sky

Answer 29

Amazing Poem, One spelling error I found was in the line 10. Other than that, Great Poem.

Original sentence: Since then our love have taken deep flight.

Fixed sentence: Since then our love has taken deep flight.

Answer 30

wow! I liked the work of yours! There is something magical in it and also the scent of romanticism.

Answer 31

beautiful that's all i can say for now and i think i may be able to fix in to a song if you would like

Answer 32

good job

Answer 33

@SkyVoltage beautiful poem. Mind reading my story?

Answer 34

sure

Answer 35

@AllisonOS check this out

Answer 36

o-o Way to go baby omg. That is so freaking cool. I love et <333

Answer 37

@Jason4Jesus

Answer 38

your poems are so touching ... its making me tear up a bit.

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@cookieman01 @ReneSiara @ILOVELEATIFOREVER

Answer 40

tell me what you guys think

Answer 41

its awesome

Answer 42

BEAUTIFUL loooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeee it

Answer 43

@Mikaella.Gabriella