Question

I am making a fanfiction and I want to know if it is good

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/44745590-bruhitszach-dirty-fanfic

Answer 1

@TheSmartOne @myininaya @nincompoop @EclipsedStar @sleepyjess @AloneS @wwhitlock

Answer 2

I have to make an account...
*ba dum tss*

Answer 3

i have an account, i'll check it out :)

Answer 4

I think it was a good story! I'm not sure who Zach is but I defiantly could see you have some amazing writing in progress. The only down side is that the grammar could be improved. Instead of saying that Zach replied or typing the dialogue inside the paragraph the dialogue could be like this: Wendy turned and smiled at me

"Well, who else could do this with? You're my bestie!". But other than that, I believe you should continue writing it!

Answer 5

@TheSmartOne