Question

Just a poem I've started working on... any feedback?

Answer 1

Depict the stars for they shall find
A rolling of darkness intertwined
With their radiant glow from miles away
A demon of fear which they fail to slay

The wind howls to the window
A cry such of a low blow
To the imagination shuddering
As the stars start flailing

Shooting stars, the warriors
Protective, the meteors
To shield our poor entities
From these outside enemies

Dark and fear, a deadly mix
Filled with cruelty and tricks
But stars, our warriors, protect us
Shine bright as they must

To keep these evils forever at bay
Keep the pain so far away
At their border they keep alive
Their army of light must thrive

Or we humans might just die

Answer 2

0_0!!! This is amazing!!! Plz keep sending me links to your poems! These are amazing. Such feeling....Such strength!!! Wish I could write poetry that well.... You're such an amazing writer! Keep writing!!! ^_^

Answer 3

Thank you so much, I always love to hear that my poems are actually good. I kinda have a problem knowing if they are any good because I write through my emotions and some of them can be... well... not very good

Answer 4

Actually good? Actually Good?! They are great!!!! They are AMAZING!!!

Answer 5

Thank you so so much! I'm glad to have a fan... some people don't like them just because they can be a bit depressing, but that's what gives it so much emotion

Answer 6

their amazing!! <3

Answer 7

Thanks Yuno, glad you like it!

Answer 8

that was amazing, and remember. The best artists have their doubts about their master pieces

Answer 9

like seriously. id happily read all of your poems. cx