Question

Understanding No one else needs to come im asking someone specifically

Answer 1

@Vocaloid

Sorry for bothering you just one last time could you help me understnad this to its like the final draft to the other one i guess but i dont understand

Answer 2

This is what it says i dont understand though if you can thanks for the help

Analyzing Your Organization

When revising your research presentation, checking its organization is very important. Look over your draft and analyze your organization to see if it matches your outline. Stop at the end of each slide and refer to your outline.
Check Your Facts

Read through your draft to verify that the facts, statistics, and quotations you cite are accurate. Don’t rely on your memory—refer to the original source material as your work. You can also refer to your notes in the Research Guide worksheet. With the exception of direct quotations, be sure you have written the information in your own words.
Varying Sentence and Slide Length

Look at each individual slide. Did you use bulleted and numbered lists to organize the slide content? Do you have long run-on sentences on each slide? Having long sentences and paragraphs on a slide is hard to read, and it affects how your audience engages. Look at the two examples. Think about the following question: Which slide is harder to read?

Slide 1
The average temperature at the Earth’s surfaces has been increasing due to heat-trapping greenhouse gases. When temperatures rise, there is an increase of evaporation from the oceans and land, leading to an increase in precipitation. This causes extreme weather, such as:
storms
floods
hurricanes
droughts

Slide 2
The average temperature at the surface of the Earth has been increasing over the past century, primarily because human activities are adding large quantities of heat-trapping greenhouse gases to the atmosphere. Generally, warmer surface temperatures lead to an increase in evaporation from the oceans and land, leading to an increase in globally averaged precipitation. However, while some regions can get more precipitation, shifting storm patterns and increased evaporation can cause some areas to experience more severe droughts than they have in the past. Scientific studies also indicate that extreme weather events such as storms, floods, and hurricanes are likely to become more intense. However, because these extremes already vary naturally, it may be difficult over short time periods to distinguish whether changes in their intensity and frequency can be attributed to larger climate trends caused by human influences.

Answer 3

sorry for so much reading:P

Answer 4

the first two paragraphs are just telling you tips on how to write a good presentation

Answer 5

the next paragraph is asking you to compare slide 1 and slide 2

Answer 6

which one is easier to read?

Answer 7

um 1 i guess

Answer 8

Yes! like the paragraph says, by breaking down information into bullet points, and cutting down on words, your slide is easier to read

Answer 9

slide 2 is just a giant blob of text

Answer 10

ahh i get it it wants me to break it down make it easier to understand!

Answer 11

yup

Answer 12

Thanks dude so one last thing do i gotta take it from the sample work?

Answer 13

or i gueess i could ask my teacher

Answer 14

Thanks!

Answer 15

np