Question

I'd love to get some feedback on lyrics I just wrote. Here they are:

Answer 1

I feel like you were made for me
Like our encounters were meant to be
And you were sent to save me
From a life of pain and misery

Though time may fade our memories
I won't forget our pleasantries
And how I thought we were supposed to be
And how you captured the most of me

I wonder at the mystery
Of your perspective's history
And if ours match in harmony
But I fear this ends in tragedy

Of hearts that strong were beating
But words continued defeating
And left open wounds bleeding
And ignored the chance for redeeming

But this hope keeps on repeating
The chance of life worth living
In words, maybe deceiving
But in love, always believing

Answer 2

That's really impressive man! :) Sounds awesome!

Answer 3

Thanks. I appreciate it.

Answer 4

Sounds amazing, you're amazing (:

Answer 5

Thank you!

Answer 6

So is this a poem or officially lyrical?

Answer 7

Well, it's sort of in between. I've written music for it but I'm not very happy with it yet.

Answer 8

Either way, go with your gut. A poem is a masterpiece and a song is a masterpiece. :)

Answer 9

That's amazing! I hope I can write song lyrics like that one day! :)

Answer 10

this is amazing! you are a really good writer.

Answer 11

Thank you both. I really appreciate it.