Question

Feedback? This is my story:

Answer 1

There are days that I think I’m fine. Days that he doesn’t pass through my mind at all. But then something happens, and it links me towards him. He probably doesn’t spend his free time going over every single conversation we ever had. The thing is, the more I think about him, the more depressed I get. How can anyone ever replace him? No one really knew about us. But the fact that he even feel for me in the first place tells me all that I need to know. He was the most popular guys at his school. I was homeschooled. He could have had any girl in that giant school. But instead, he chose me.
    It’s kind of weird to think about. The fact is, when one thing leads to another, it can hurt you just as much as knowing you didn’t try, nor did it happen.
    He deleted all of my pictures of him. I don’t know why, but he did for some reason. The only picture I have of us is my screensaver. He hated that I took pictures of him. Before I left, he was the only thing on my mind and still is. Someone once told me that your first love never truly dies. And I'm truly terrified that I'm never going to love someone as much as I loved him.
I've been told that a broken heart hurts even worse than a broken arm. It's true. At least with a broken arm, it heals.

Answer 2

Let me know what you think!

Answer 3

Wow, That is full of emotion. I'm (like) speechless. That was Great!

Answer 4

i love it and it is emotionally caught in ur life!! awesome!!

Answer 5

This is amazing! I love the detail and emotion present in it. This reminds me of my writing on Wattpad :') Continue on with this, it is PERFECT!

Answer 6

Thank you!