Can someone help with a letter to my former teacher? She was in an accsident and I want to visit her

Question

callmekiki · Answer

What kind of accident?

bluemoon1 · Answer

she was hit by a semi and is finally going back to school today.

bluemoon1 · Answer

I was gonna start it out like this but I don't know:

Hi! I heard about your accsident and that  you'd be back today. I wanted to know if it will be okay to visit you on Tuesday during 2nd lunch? If you for any reason cannot I totally understand. Hope you get to feeling better! 

- your favorite student, Alina Kirk

bluemoon1 · Answer

@kropot72 can you help maybe fix this letter up a bit and check for punctuation?

unklerhaukus · Answer

*accident

brooke..help00 · Answer

Hi! I heard about your accident and that you'd be back today. You are an amazing teacher and I wanted to know if it will be okay to visit you on Tuesday during 2nd lunch? If you for any reason cannot I totally understand. Thanks so much for being an amazing teacher and helping me know everything I need to! Hope you get to feeling better!

mathmale · Answer

Suggest you leave out "You are an amazing teacher and ... " because it's redundant.

"Hi! I heard about your accident and that you'd be back today. I wanted to   [ask] if it [would ] be okay IF I WERE to visit you on Tuesday during 2nd lunch.  If you for any reason cannot I totally understand. Thanks so much for being an amazing teacher and FOR helping me [learn]  everything I need to KNOW! Hope you get to feeling better!

mathmale · Answer

"If for any reason you cannot see me then, I'll totally understand."

bluemoon1 · Answer

Thank you everyone!