im writing a paper for government is this thesis statement good: Throughout our rough history of slavery, there have been suggestions to abolish it. And slavery was finally band but is it truly gone

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sgt_sauris · Answer

Assuming you are using exactly what you typed above. No. It is not a good Thesis statement. You need correct grammar and punctuation. After you correct that we can talk about how the thesis statement itself needs improving. :)

studybuddie · Answer

im not good at papers :( @Sgt_Sauris

studybuddie · Answer

or punctuation

sgt_sauris · Answer

Ok. But all we are doing is starting with your Thesis statement.

studybuddie · Answer

yea ik

studybuddie · Answer

Goals of a Dead Man
Throughout our rough history of slavery, there have been suggestions to abolish it. And slavery was finally band but is it truly gone? Martin Luther King was an African American man during the time of slavery. He was a symbol for the people try to convince everyone that no one is above one another. Luther believed that everybody was equal to one another.

studybuddie · Answer

this is what i have now

sgt_sauris · Answer

Alright. it might be better if we go and do this in google docs. So I can highlight and such and show you what you need to do there. Sound alright?

studybuddie · Answer

ight sure but how r you genna see it?

sgt_sauris · Answer

I sent you a message with the link

sgt_sauris · Answer

Did you get it? Are you at the document?

studybuddie · Answer

yea

sgt_sauris · Answer

Alright. I cannot see the chat box... I may have done this wrong. I do not really use it much XD

sgt_sauris · Answer

Alright. Do you have a google account? Are you signed in? I can see Anonymous Badger