Question

A poem I wrote a couple weeks ago. Tell me what you think.

Answer 1

Grimm Reaper come take my hand,

You're the only one who understands,

Grimm Reaper come and set me free

Don't forget about me,

Grimm Reaper come guide me to

a new life

I can't win, losing the fight,

Take me to my neverland,

I'll keep it secret

I'll keep the secret

I'm good at that,

Grimm Reaper come rescue me

be my friend I'm in need,

Please don't leave,

I believe,

Don't trick me.

Answer 2

@Atsie @SapphireMoon @YoungStudier

Answer 3

Seems pretty dark from my worldview, but I suppose it's the end of October and all. The word patterns and beat are nice, linguistically it's very pretty.

Answer 4

I LOVE IT *~*

Answer 5

That is awesome!! Especially since it's October! Great job!! 👏🏽👏🏽😊

Answer 6

This is very outstanding! I appreciate the tones of darkness, obviously some being drawn from your own experiences in life. Keep up the great work! You're sure to go places with your writings!

Answer 7

This is very different and unique and as the others said, the end of October definitely filter's it's very subtle ray's through the poem. I like it though. ^.^

Answer 8

Thank you all :)

Answer 9

Welcome Hope!! ♥♥