Question

Rewrite the following paragraph using pronouns where appropriate. Be sure that the pronouns match the antecedent.

Millie and Tillie are twins who very much enjoy the sport of basketball. Millie and Tillie's father has been teaching Millie and Tillie about basketball since Millie and Tillie were little girls. Millie and Tillie's father often takes Millie and Tillie to basketball games. Millie and Tillie know all about basketball and like to watch basketball on television with Millie and Tillie's father, too. Millie and Tillie's mother does not understand why Millie and Tillie and Millie and

Answer 1

since you posted in English you may want to read my response and close the post in mathematics

Answer 2

any questions?

Answer 3

Millie and Tillie are twins who very much enjoy the sport of football. Their father has been teaching them about it since they were little girls. Their father often takes them to football games. They know all about football and like to watch it on television with their father, too. Their mother does not understand why they and their father like football so much

Answer 4

For the beginning, you'd want to include the names so that the readers are aware on what you're talking about. The same thing applies when a new object or thing is mentioned such as basketball. It also looks like your paragraph is incomplete as it is missing info from the end. If you can add that, I'll be able to complete the rest for you. Here's the paragraph:

*Millie and Tillie are twins who very much enjoy the sport of basketball. Their father has been teaching them about it since they were little girls. Their father often takes them to basketball games. They know all about it and like to watch it on television with their father, too. Their mother does not understand why they...*

Answer 5

My bad, replace the football word with basketball and you're set to go! (: I read it as football instead of basketball woops!