Question

Feed back & improvement please:

Answer 1

It is what you’ve become that I fear most,
It is your contagious laugh that I fear,
It is those piercing green eyes that spark like emeralds I fear,
It is your smile that captures my soul that I fear,
It is the way your enchanting voice makes me tremble that I fear,
It is the way your soft fragile lips move when you speak that I fear,
It is the way you whisper into my ear that I fear,
It is the warmth of your touch that I fear
It is when your lips are on me that i fear
It is the sweet symphony from your voice that I fear
It is the distance between us that I fear
It is the long painful nights that I fear
It is the tears you will bring to me that I fear
It is that falling in love with you has made me fear I might lose myself.

Answer 2

change "it is" to "It's" also the first line doesn't make sense

Answer 3

It is weird to me that you end every sentence with the word fear and the last one was not like others. This could make the reader have their own ending of the poem. Or you may also check what the writers from online writing service can tell you about your work. I am sure their remark will be reasonable.

Answer 4

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