Question

Paraphrase medal :))
1) A time comes in the story where telephone is personified and it represents the man.
2) Even though she is talking to the telephone she truly wants to hurt the man for making her wait for his call and putting her in a state of desperation. She hates him for taking her dignity and making her feel desolate.
3) She is so much emerged in her desperation and her obsession that she prefers that the man is dead than the idea of him not desiring her. She keeps on looking at the telephone hoping and wishing it would ring. It becomes the center of her life and she keeps on look

Answer 1

@trinketandtristan

Answer 2

Deal: You start the paraphrasing yourself and share y our work here. Then someone else or I will comment on your work. OK?

Answer 3

@trinketandtristan ?? helpp

Answer 4

@mathmale
1)In the story, a time comes when the telephone represents the man and is personified.

Answer 5

how does this sound

Answer 6

I cannot do the second one its hard.

Answer 7

What you have written is true. However, much of the interest in this story comes from the fact that the lady treats her phone almost as if it were a person. After all, you can talk at a phone and you can try hard to listen to its "voice."

Try to elaborate on these ideas. Add a few more details. You don't have to paraphrase every single thing.