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rootbeer003:

help

rootbeer003:

http://prntscr.com/eyun0f

Ultrilliam:

that is (most of the time) correct.

Ultrilliam:

unless it's a whackadoodle who talks in third person... LOL

rootbeer003:

can u help me with more?

Ultrilliam:

if I can sure

rootbeer003:

http://prntscr.com/eyus14

Ultrilliam:

Correct

rootbeer003:

http://prntscr.com/eyutex

Ultrilliam:

Correct.

rootbeer003:

http://prntscr.com/eyuu1b

Ultrilliam:

Im torn between A and B.

rootbeer003:

i think its b

Ultrilliam:

I could go either way f2d628ebae2d60b9befa3a64107cc45d.png

rootbeer003:

lets go with b

Ultrilliam:

Alrighty :P

rootbeer003:

http://prntscr.com/eyuw8t

rootbeer003:

this was a guess

Ultrilliam:

I haven't the foggiest O_o... never even heard of that...

Ultrilliam:

lemme do some research real quick

rootbeer003:

kk

Ultrilliam:

According to their website: Organization is the internal structure of a piece of writing, the thread of central meaning, the pattern and sequence, so long as it fits the central idea. Organizational structure can be based on comparison-contrast, deductive logic, point-by-point analysis, development of a central theme, chronological history of an event, or any of a dozen other identifiable patterns. When Organization is strong, the piece begins meaningfully and creates in the reader a sense of anticipation that is, ultimately, systematically fulfilled. Events proceed logically; information is given to the reader in the right doses at the right times so that the reader never loses interest. Connections are strong, which is another way of saying that bridges from one idea to the next hold up. The piece closes with a sense of resolution, tying up loose ends, bringing things to a satisfying closure, answering important questions while still leaving the reader something to think about.

rootbeer003:

Close to d?

Ultrilliam:

hang on, still reading it LOL

Ultrilliam:

yea that seems right

rootbeer003:

Ok thanks for reading all that lol

rootbeer003:

http://prntscr.com/eyuz84

rootbeer003:

this one seems right

Ultrilliam:

lemme re-open the site LOL

Steelers:

damn ultri

Ultrilliam:

The Conventions trait is the mechanical correctness of the piece and includes five elements: spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar/usage, and paragraphing. Writing that is strong in Conventions has been proofread and edited with care. Since this trait has so many pieces to it, it's almost an analytical trait within an analytic system. As you assess a piece for convention, ask yourself: "How much work would a copy editor need to do to prepare the piece for publication?" This will keep all of the elements in conventions equally in play. Conventions is the only trait where we make specific grade level accommodations, and expectations should be based on grade level to include only those skills that have been taught. (Handwriting and neatness are not part of this trait. They belong with Presentation.)

rootbeer003:

C?

Ultrilliam:

That appears to be correct.

rootbeer003:

ok

rootbeer003:

http://prntscr.com/eyv1s3 i have no idea on this one

Ultrilliam:

Well, I suck at grammar, so Im out on this one

rootbeer003:

Do u know this one @Allison

rootbeer003:

http://prntscr.com/eyv3cv ok next

Allison:

I like D but I could be wrong.

Ultrilliam:

Leaning torwards D, but don't take my word for this, im only 65% sure ._.

Ultrilliam:

LOL

rootbeer003:

Ok for which question

Allison:

That last one.

Ultrilliam:

i like how we said the same answer at the same time x'D

rootbeer003:

http://prntscr.com/eyv4lx

rootbeer003:

??

Ultrilliam:

the one before Q6

Ultrilliam:

or above

rootbeer003:

oh ok so what about 6 tho

Allison:

I dunno 6.

Ultrilliam:

neither do i...

rootbeer003:

ill go withhhhhhhhhhhh c

rootbeer003:

http://prntscr.com/eyv61l did we do this?

Ultrilliam:

No, but i can't answer that one either x.x

rootbeer003:

hm

rootbeer003:

ok next

rootbeer003:

http://prntscr.com/eyv9dn

Ultrilliam:

B I'm pretty sure.

rootbeer003:

Are u familiar with a memoir?

Ultrilliam:

http://prntscr.com/eyva9r

rootbeer003:

a memoir

Ultrilliam:

http://prntscr.com/eyvapo

Ultrilliam:

why are you targeting a memoir only?

Ultrilliam:

the narrator CAN be the author, but that is not always true, where as B is always true

rootbeer003:

http://prntscr.com/eyvb2z

Ultrilliam:

Oh... I'm blind.

Ultrilliam:

Yep that's right LOL

rootbeer003:

lol

rootbeer003:

http://prntscr.com/eyvbj7

Ultrilliam:

we did that one already

rootbeer003:

http://prntscr.com/eyvc19

Ultrilliam:

correct

Ultrilliam:

but we did that one to

rootbeer003:

lol

rootbeer003:

just makin sure

rootbeer003:

ok lets see what we got wrong

rootbeer003:

2 wrong thats good

rootbeer003:

Ok thanks you

rootbeer003:

u saved me

Ultrilliam:

np ^_^

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