Briefest description of Yorktown battle.
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Ahem ahem. Okai. *Cracks knuckles* Google: The culmination of the Yorktown campaign, the siege proved to be the last major land battle of the American Revolutionary War in the North American theater, as the surrender by Cornwallis, and the capture of both him and his army, prompted the British government to negotiate an end to the conflict. Rephrase it~ The top of the Yorktown campaign, the siege proved to be the last major land battle of the American Revolutionary War in North American, as the surrender by Cornwallis, and the capture of both him and his army, motivated the British government to arrange an end to the battle. Good? o.0
Yes that great but i forgot to add thats it has to be like for example, you go to a park and they tell you about this event.. So like Hi welcome to York town blah blah this is what happened here
you dont have to make it like super perfect :)
WELP. *Cracks meh knuckles again but this time breaking them* o.o What I wrote: The top of the Yorktown campaign, the siege proved to be the last major land battle of the American Revolutionary War in North American, as the surrender by Cornwallis, and the capture of both him and his army, motivated the British government to arrange an end to the battle. Introducing it to someone: Back in 1781, around late September and mid October, here in Virginia, there was a war. A war that is known today as the Battle of Yorktown. It was an American and French war against the British. American soldiers were led by General George Washington, the French troops were led by Comte de Rochambeau, and British troops were led by peer and Lieutenant Charles Cornwallis. Americans and the French won against Britain and ended major land operations here in North America. It was the beginning of peace negotiations.
Is that good?!
Is the yellow too bright? o.o Back in 1781, around late September and mid October, here in Virginia, there was a war. A war that is known today as the Battle of Yorktown. It was an American and French war against the British. American soldiers were led by General George Washington, the French troops were led by Comte de Rochambeau, and British troops were led by peer and Lieutenant Charles Cornwallis. Americans and the French won against Britain and ended major land operations here in North America. It was the beginning of peace negotiations.
the yellow had me squinting lol
You should have said something lol!
and yes great job!! ty i have like 9 more people and events to do :(((
I can try to help. I'm bored of my homework lmaoo.
aw thanksss ur the best
So next would be the Patriots , it can be a simple event just teaching the visitors about it
Okay what event though?
any kind of war or i think there is a boot camp
info about the army maybe
What is it asking? Is it like a question, or..?
Actually can you give me like 5 minutes, just gotta do an Algebra test. ~-~
no it can rly be any event like a war
and yes ofc
Oh like a veteran or something like that. Okaii. I'm still learning English xD
yea sure
So not the Boston Patriots. Got it.
LOL
Lmaoo. Is there a war or something you want me to talk about?
u can do it on these guys i guess
Are you in Virginia and going to do a presentation or something like that?
no its like hw and supposed to be something like easy it doesnt have to be perfect
Got it~
like u make a map and make marks where the events are at like an actual park
which i already did the map
Kay.
HEY! WELCOME TO GREEN!!!
oh wow ty lol
I got so used to seeing you in blue, I didn't notice. o-o
Anyway. Google: The Continental Army was formed by the Second Continental Congress after the outbreak of the American Revolutionary War by the colonies that became the United States of America. You telling it: In 1779, the Revolutionary War began by the colonies that became the United States of America. Established by a resolution of the Congress on June 14, 1775, it was created to coordinate the military efforts of the Thirteen Colonies in their revolt against the rule of Great Britain. The Thirteen Colonies were fighting for their independence from Great Britain. The Thirteen Colonies grew and today there are 50 states that celebrate Independence Day on July 4th (Also known as the Fourth of July), every year. Patriotic displays and family events are organized throughout the United States of America. How's this?!
Wait can you see the pink XD
no Radio
lol*
GAAHH.
In 1779, the Revolutionary War began by the colonies that became the United States of America. Established by a resolution of the Congress on June 14, 1775, it was created to coordinate the military efforts of the Thirteen Colonies in their revolt against the rule of Great Britain. The Thirteen Colonies were fighting for their independence from Great Britain. The Thirteen Colonies grew and today there are 50 states that celebrate Independence Day on July 4th (Also known as the Fourth of July), every year. Patriotic displays and family events are organized throughout the United States of America.
its the creativity that counts :))))))))
Sorry c':
All good :) and perfect
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while i add that next is george washington
Oh I like that dude.
so like yea just pretty much introduce him and it doesnt have to be like a lot of info just simple things
Okay
George Washington was born in Virginia on February 22, 1732, and died on December 14, 1799. George Washington was the first president of the United States from 1789 to 1797. I got this so far xD
*Hoping you can read it* ;-;
i can :)
George Washington was born in Virginia on February 22, 1732, and died on December 14, 1799. George Washington was the first president of the United States from 1789 to 1797. He was also one of the Founding Fathers of the United States.
Added some~
perfect now lets do treaty of paris
The Treaty of Paris of 1783, negotiated between the United States and Great Britain, ended the revolutionary war and accepted American independence. The Continental Congress named a five-member agency to negotiate an agreement which had the following members: John Adams, Benjamin Franklin, John Jay, Thomas Jefferson, and Henry Laurens.
How's dat o-o
Great:) are you doing it in your own words?
Yes! This is Google's: The Treaty of Paris of 1783, negotiated between the United States and Great Britain, ended the revolutionary war and recognized American independence. The Continental Congress named a five-member commission to negotiate a treaty–John Adams, Benjamin Franklin, John Jay, Thomas Jefferson, and Henry Laurens.
Actually, I can change it a bit more. Wait.
The Treaty of Paris of 1783, arranged between the United States and Great Britain, ended the revolutionary war and accepted American independence. The Continental Congress had five members to work out an agreement which had John Adams, Benjamin Franklin, John Jay, Thomas Jefferson, and Henry Laurens.
How's that? c:
looks good thanks gurl
Mhm :D
ok nexxxt is Bunker hill
Okay.
Battle of Bunker Hill? o.0
yesh
On June 17, 1775, in Charlestown, Boston, Massachusetts, the Battle of Bunker Hill was fought, during the Siege of Boston in the beginning of the American Revolutionary War. British General William Howe landed his troops on the Charlestown Peninsula overlooking Boston, Massachusetts, and lead them against Breed’s Hill, an armed American position just below Bunker Hill. How's dis o-o
thats actually rly goodd
sorry ihave so much topics for u lol
It's okay lol I'm taking a little break from Algebra anyway. How many more?
eek 5...
*Dies* Okay hit me :D
alright :)) next is Thomas Paine
Okay, let's see what's something important this dude did.
Lol
Thomas Paine was born in Thetford, United Kingdom, on February 9, 1737, and died on June 8, 1809 in New York. Thomas Paine was en English born American political activist, philosopher, political theorist, and revolutionary. He was also one of the Founding Fathers of the United States.
good job, next is intolerable acts
ur saving my life
YAY! *Crosses "Save a life" off my bucket list* Hehe. c:
:)
In 1774, the British Parliament created the Intolerable Acts, which were harsh laws to punish the American colonists for the Boston Tea Party and other protests. These laws were also referred to as the Coercive Acts. How's this??
Hm. Wait.
In 1774, the British Parliament created the Intolerable Acts, which were severe laws to punish the American colonists for the Boston Tea Party and other protests. These laws were also referred to as the Coercive Acts.
I didn't like the word "Harsh" in there.
lol alright thanks and next is stamp acts :D
Stamp acts is the start of tax, right..?
Okay, I'mma figure dis out. How many more XD
2 more not including this
i think its when tax started
Okay. Gahh this one is kind of hard, I don't know nothing about taxes, so yuh. Gimme a minute or two~
okaii
The Stamp Act of 1765 started what is known today as taxation. This all I got so far. Do I explain what tax does and how it works?
http://www.history.org/history/teaching/tchcrsta.cfm u can just grab random facts from this
Okaii let's grab dem facts.
The new tax was demanded on all American colonists and required them to pay a tax on every piece of printed paper they used. Taxes and duties on colonial trade had always been viewed as measures to regulate business, not to raise money. However, the Stamp Act was viewed as a direct attempt by England to raise money in the colonies without the approval of the colonial congress.
I got a few sentences from each website and rephrased like 2-3 words..Is it okay?
oh dang thanks man
ok 2 more next is patrick henry
*Is a girl* xD
oh yea ik i just man like not in a gender way lol
Oh whoops. c:
btw did u put the tax thingy in ur own words?
Yeah I changed a few words from the sentences.
ok thanks :))
oh pwetty lol
Patrick Henry was born in Virginia on May 29, 1736, and died on June 6, 1799. Patrick Henry was an American attorney, planter, and public speaker. He was also the former Governor of Virginia.
Who's the last one?
and lastly is the redcoats battle
Kay.
That's when they had the big war wearing all red coats ._. Right
yes
Redcoat is military uniforms that were used by the British Army from the 17th to the 20th centuries. Das all I knoe D:
oh try looking up redcoat battle not the uniform lol
ah well i cant even find anything on it
ill try to get info from my text book
I did look up the battle :/
Ooo look what I found!

Lol i saw that too
LOL I get distracted easily~
i cant fina anything :(
Are you all dun?
Oh let me halp~
just honestly add random things about redcoat war and that would be golden
The British Army during the American Revolutionary War performed for eight years in campaigns fought around the globe.
OOOOO I GOT IT!!!!
Wait here.
The British Army during the American Revolutionary War performed for eight years in campaigns fought around the globe. In 1775, there was about 45,000 volunteered British soldiers and they were spread out around the world to fight the different countries. TA DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
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Thanks so much :')
Of course c: Have a good night~ <3
You too :)
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