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Falconmaster:

My scary and dark poems

Falconmaster:

I am going to put the one I like more first

Felicity96:

Go Kyle

HuskyNation:

Poem away

n123:

Im so excited

Felicity96:

Me too Nia

Falconmaster:

There is pain at first Feels like your chest is going to burst You think about all you have done And all of the fun As you start to see white You begin to give up the fight Everything fades away You find yourself at the oceans bay You can finally rest Because your in heavens nest

Felicity96:

Oh wow Kyle

HuskyNation:

O_O

n123:

wow...that's just....wow

Falconmaster:

That is the second one I made. Here is the first one I dont like it its too dark

Felicity96:

Shoot for it Kyle

n123:

I lowkey wanna put these in a edit...but I wont

Allison:

I can't imagine my baby being scary x'D <3

Falconmaster:

I barge in my room pis sed As I put that blade to my wrist I begin to pull But the blade is dull As I sharpen it I wonder why Im throwing a fit I ponder about life and death Im prepared to take my final breath My vision begins to fuzz The my phone begins to buzz Its my friend saying "wanna come over" He sure is my lucky clover

Felicity96:

O-O

Allison:

I'm taking that one. It describes me so much.

HuskyNation:

:/

Felicity96:

I do too Allison it describes me too

n123:

I've never related to any poem then this this one...

Falconmaster:

Make sure you give credit to me XD :P

Felicity96:

I will Kyle

Falconmaster:

The first one I posted it about a person who gets shot, thinks about their life, and goes to heaven.

n123:

that's deep

Felicity96:

I like the first one Kyle

HuskyNation:

i thought it was a heart attack

Felicity96:

Im gonna take that one too if that is fine Kyle

Falconmaster:

Ill make more :P

Felicity96:

You should Kyle

mackenzief8340:

man those are deep and dark i use to write deep and dark poems but my mom found the binder full of poems and burned them all....

Elsa213:

Now your poems are lit, Mackenzie.

mackenzief8340:

yeah... they are lit alright... lit into ashes....

Falconmaster:

Like a fish in a new pond I am just looking for a bond On new hunting grounds This year is going to be profound Just trying to find my clique And making sure I stick As I get shoved and pushed Feels like I am getting ambushed Just trying to fit in

Falconmaster:

^^^ still working on this one idk if I am going to keep it I dont know what else to add :p

Elsa213:

Is the poem about someone new who is lost and gets bullied? e.e

Felicity96:

Wow Kyle

Falconmaster:

Its about someone trying to fit in its not finished yet

Felicity96:

Its good Kyle i like it

Elsa213:

I'm not good at understanding this stuffz, sorreh. <\3

Falconmaster:

does pen rhyme with in?

Elsa213:

I don't think so.

Falconmaster:

XD im screwed then :p

Elsa213:

Pen rhymes with den and men and lens and tense.

Falconmaster:

Like a fish in a new pond I am just looking for a bond On new hunting grounds This year is going to be profound Just trying to find my clique And making sure I stick As I get shoved and pushed Feels like I am getting ambushed Just trying to fit in Then out of no where I hear "How have you been?" This is something I can not comprehend Have I just mad a friend?

Falconmaster:

??? How is it now?

Elsa213:

Yesh, yew `mad` a fran

NelsonTA:

woah

Falconmaster:

Its still a work in progress XD

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