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Pixel:

You will write a poem from an inanimate object's point of view. You should describe items such as the object’s daily sights and life. You can describe interactions the item you chose has with others, etc. Be creative. 1. You MUST use at LEAST two literary devices. Some of these devices include: Imagery, internal rhyme, end rhyme, rhythm, meter, mood, figurative language, simile, metaphor, alliteration, personification, onomatopoeia (definitions and examples can be found online or in course) 2. Inanimate object choices: food item (apple, orange, pizza etc.), Athletic equipment (baseball, racket, shoes, etc.), Nature (water, rocks, trees, etc.) 3. Your poem must include the following: • 200-300 Words • 2-3 literary devices (don’t overdo it) • Proper punctuation/grammar • 100% original writing • Descriptive language • At least 2 stanzas • Creatively uses sensory details to clearly show purpose and addresses all aspects of the prompt

AngeI:

Write it about your monitor and all the horrible things its seen

Pixel:

its for school

AngeI:

i know

Elsa213:

What do you want the poem to be about, Pixel?

Pixel:

your unhelpful i cant poem for the life of me

Pixel:

Like i have no creativity for poems

AngeI:

Pixel this is a homework help site, we dont do your homework for you. So try to come up with an idea of what to write about.

Pixel:

that is the problem idk what to write about

Elsa213:

Pixel, do you want to write about food?

AngeI:

"inanimate object"

Elsa213:

You can also write about life. c:

AngeI:

make it about the soap and what happens when its dropped ;3

AngeI:

kidding dun hurt meh

Pixel:

UIF(DIOHJSAK

Elsa213:

Life can be an inanimate object. o;

Pixel:

ITS FOR SCHOOL ANGEL JEESUS

Elsa213:

Lemme think... A lime?

AngeI:

the pillow of your waifu

Pixel:

i dun have a waifu yet

Elsa213:

oooo Your bed? o:

AngeI:

thats a good idea, his bed probably never saw any bad things

Pixel:

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm personification and metaphor

Pixel:

This one thing will hold me tight at night never letting go it will ALWAYS be there for me it takes it's arms and wraps me in warmth keeping from the fright that comes at night

Pixel:

Is that a good start

AngeI:

i feel like you have ghosts that hold you at night

Bearclaws72:

How about the life of a teddy bear?

Pixel:

This one thing will hold me tight at night never letting go it will ALWAYS be there for me it takes it's arms and wraps me in warmth keeping from the fright that comes at night when i try to get out it calls to me saying, no don't leave and then it calls to me embracing me with it's warm hugs it comforts me like a mother comforts her baby

Pixel:

@Allison

Allison:

I am not writing a poem ._.

Elsa213:

My bed; Whom holds my sleep; As dreams spark, distracting from dark; Knocking on the door, is magic and hope; endless dreams and counting sheep. My bed; It has my future led.

Pixel:

Noe i meant dies mine look good so far >~<

Allison:

Yes it does.

Allison:

Kat o: <3

Elsa213:

Oooo Teddy bear. ^.^ A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair.

Elsa213:

Magiccc <3 ^.^

Pixel:

buh i cant use it now >~<

AngeI:

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Elsa213:

Why not, Pixel? ;-;

Pixel:

its called plagiarism

Elsa213:

Hrmm, it is. I made it to help you though. :c

Pixel:

;c

Pixel:

i suck at poems

Elsa213:

Just rhyme and make sense. o:

Pixel:

Beds leds teds feds meds

Pixel:

like that?

Elsa213:

Hrmm, lets see.. Gimme a word. :3

Pixel:

UniPickle

AngeI:

UniDickle ee

AngeI:

e.e

Pixel:

angel is nu halp this was due yesterday q.q

Elsa213:

Err, that's a name. Not a word. o:

Pixel:

o;

Elsa213:

You can use my teddy bear poem, Pixel. :3 I give you all credit. :p

Pixel:

Buht its nawt 200-300 words

Elsa213:

I can add more. ^.^

Pixel:

its only 42

Elsa213:

Okayy~ The subject is teddy bears. What are your actions with a teddy bear?

Pixel:

Cuddlez

AngeI:

protection

AngeI:

comfort

Pixel:

HUGS

Elsa213:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. We cuddle, as we pass through the puddles of rain.

AngeI:

Elsa thats nice but maybe you could add something like it like the light in the dark and the warmth in the cold

Pixel:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. We cuddle, as we pass through the puddles of rain. When I lose you it is a pain.

Pixel:

i added the last line ;o

Elsa213:

Das stereotypical, Angel. Not all teddy bears can warm yew.

AngeI:

it was more figurative

Elsa213:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. That's pretty, Pixel. ^.^ However, it should be the last line. :3 `When I lose you, it's a pain.` `I hope forever we will be the same.`

Elsa213:

Hrmm... When I lose you, it's a pain. I hope forever we will stay the same.

Elsa213:

That's better. :p

Pixel:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. We cuddle, as we pass through the puddles of rain. When I lose you it is a pain.

Pixel:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. We cuddle, as we pass through the puddles of rain. When I lose you it is a pain. I hope forever we will stay the same.

Elsa213:

@Bearclaws72 I did your `teddy bear` suggestion. o;

Pixel:

it only 68 words eldur ;o

Elsa213:

Pixel, we should leave the last 2 lines for last.

Pixel:

otay

Elsa213:

At the end of the entire poem.

Bearclaws72:

@Elsa213 You dah best XD

Elsa213:

Hrmm, what else does a human do with a teddy bear? o:

PandaSurvive:

store it on a shelf

Elsa213:

I just realized during the poem, I was first speaking in general, then started talking about MY bear, and now I'm conversing with the bear. Dun dunn dunnn

PandaSurvive:

:OOOOOO

Pixel:

THey tell the bear all their problems like its a person

Elsa213:

I don't store a teddy bear on a shelf, Panda. <.<

Pixel:

hrmm

Elsa213:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view.

Elsa213:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view. Whilst you sit on the shelf, I wish you the best of health.

Elsa213:

How many words are there?

Pixel:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view. Whilst you sit on the shelf, I wish you the best of health. You are worth more than gold, i will love you till i'm old.

Pixel:

83 before i added my lines

Pixel:

96 after

Elsa213:

Again, we will explain how much the bear means to us at the end.

PandaSurvive:

when i have my bear, I have nothing to fear?

Pixel:

you have tuh add it to the poem panda

PandaSurvive:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view. Whilst you sit on the shelf, I wish you the best of health. You are worth more than gold, i will love you till i'm old. When I have my bear, there is nothing left to fear.

Pixel:

107

PandaSurvive:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view. Whilst you sit on the shelf, I wish you the best of health. You are worth more than gold, i will love you till i'm old. When I have my bear, there is nothing left to fear. I have always held you dear, now that is a reason to cheer.

Pixel:

120 words

PandaSurvive:

So i had an idea, but it makes the poem take a turn and you probably dont want your teaching seeing it e.e

Pixel:

e.e

PandaSurvive:

"Even when I thought the end was near, you made me see everything oh so clear" ;~;

Pixel:

;~:

Pixel:

is eldur dead ;o

Elsa213:

I was enjoying lunch. :p

Pixel:

oeh Was ite gewd o.o

Elsa213:

It's burning my throat. >.<

PandaSurvive:

oh noes

Pixel:

Rip

PandaSurvive:

1 attachment
Elsa213:

Okayy~ Back to the poem.

Pixel:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view. Whilst you sit on the shelf, I wish you the best of health. You are worth more than gold, i will love you till i'm old. When I have my bear, there is nothing left to fear. I have always held you dear, now that is a reason to cheer. When i feel down, you turn my frown upsidedown.

Elsa213:

When I'm down, you slew my frown.

Elsa213:

Dat demonized teddeh

Pixel:

Ah gewd juan

Pixel:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view. Whilst you sit on the shelf, I wish you the best of health. You are worth more than gold, i will love you till i'm old. When I have my bear, there is nothing left to fear. I have always held you dear, now that is a reason to cheer. When I'm down, you slew my frown.

Pixel:

127 words

Elsa213:

Pixel, do you know what slew is? <.<

Pixel:

yesh

Pixel:

its killed

Elsa213:

K den. Err.. what's next?

Pixel:

idk

Pixel:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view. Whilst you sit on the shelf, I wish you the best of health. You are worth more than gold, i will love you till i'm old. When I have my bear, there is nothing left to fear. I have always held you dear, now that is a reason to cheer. When I'm down, you slew my frown. If I ever lost you, I don't know what i would do

Elsa213:

As we pass a predicament, you will have everything seem innocent.

Pixel:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view. Whilst you sit on the shelf, I wish you the best of health. You are worth more than gold, i will love you till i'm old. When I have my bear, there is nothing left to fear. I have always held you dear, now that is a reason to cheer. When I'm down, you slew my frown. If I ever lost you, I don't know what i would do As we pass a predicament, you will have everything seem innocent.

Pixel:

we ish halfway there :O

Pixel:

150

Elsa213:

Do you know what predicament is? Just asking so the teacher doesn't get curious.

Pixel:

Yes its like a Obstacle

Pixel:

or a problem

Pixel:

IM IN 9TH GRADE

Elsa213:

`Predicament` is a difficult, unpleasant, or embarrassing situation.

Pixel:

yes i know

PandaSurvive:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view. Whilst you sit on the shelf, I wish you the best of health. You are worth more than gold, i will love you till i'm old. When I have my bear, there is nothing left to fear. I have always held you dear, now that is a reason to cheer. When I'm down, you slew my frown. If I ever lost you, I don't know what i would do As we pass a predicament, you will have everything seem innocent. I will hold you till my last breath, and think of you as I met my death. IS that too dark? e.e

Pixel:

yes

Pixel:

Panda why u always dark e.e

PandaSurvive:

because my life is always so dark e.e

Elsa213:

oooo I will hold you tight, while we shine so bright. We will fight up to the end of time. Ignoring the bitter most of limes, life will be a dime.

Pixel:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view. Whilst you sit on the shelf, I wish you the best of health. You are worth more than gold, i will love you till i'm old. When I have my bear, there is nothing left to fear. I have always held you dear, now that is a reason to cheer. When I'm down, you slew my frown. If I ever lost you, I don't know what i would do As we pass a predicament, you will have everything seem innocent. I will hold you tight, while we shine so bright. We will fight up to the end of time. Ignoring the bitter most of limes, life will be a dime.

Elsa213:

How many words is that?

Pixel:

180

Pixel:

@Elsa213

PandaSurvive:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view. Whilst you sit on the shelf, I wish you the best of health. You are worth more than gold, i will love you till i'm old. When I have my bear, there is nothing left to fear. I have always held you dear, now that is a reason to cheer. When I'm down, you slew my frown. If I ever lost you, I don't know what i would do As we pass a predicament, you will have everything seem innocent. I will hold you tight, while we shine so bright. We will fight up to the end of time. Ignoring the bitter most of limes, life will be a dime. To be without you that would be a crime, and Id rather not to the time.

PandaSurvive:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view. Whilst you sit on the shelf, I wish you the best of health. You are worth more than gold, i will love you till i'm old. When I have my bear, there is nothing left to fear. I have always held you dear, now that is a reason to cheer. When I'm down, you slew my frown. If I ever lost you, I don't know what i would do As we pass a predicament, you will have everything seem innocent. I will hold you tight, while we shine so bright. We will fight up to the end of time. Ignoring the bitter most of limes, life will be a dime. To be without you that would be a crime, and Id rather not to the time.

Elsa213:

My bear, forever you will stay. Adding happiness and love, as we seek our dreams from above.

PandaSurvive:

should we make it rhyme?

Pixel:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view. Whilst you sit on the shelf, I wish you the best of health. You are worth more than gold, i will love you till i'm old. When I have my bear, there is nothing left to fear. I have always held you dear, now that is a reason to cheer. When I'm down, you slew my frown. If I ever lost you, I don't know what i would do As we pass a predicament, you will have everything seem innocent. I will hold you tight, while we shine so bright. We will fight up to the end of time. Ignoring the bitter most of limes, life will be a dime. To be without you that would be a crime, and Id rather not to the time. My bear, forever you will stay. Adding happiness and love, as we seek our dreams from above.

Pixel:

213 words :D

Elsa213:

Mai numbers doe... <.<

Elsa213:

Exactly my numbers.. Magic. :p

Pixel:

woh

PandaSurvive:

Forever you are mine, if you dont see that then you are blind?

Pixel:

A teddy bear, Aparts you from nightmares. Never allows life to seem like a tear. My bear is fair. I treat it with care. As it stares, it calms my glare. Prayers we share, I believe we will forever be a pair. You warm me to sleep, have me fall into dreams so deep. I share my life with you, you give me the force to have an imaginative view. Whilst you sit on the shelf, I wish you the best of health. You are worth more than gold, i will love you till i'm old. When I have my bear, there is nothing left to fear. I have always held you dear, now that is a reason to cheer. When I'm down, you slew my frown. If I ever lost you, I don't know what i would do As we pass a predicament, you will have everything seem innocent. I will hold you tight, while we shine so bright. We will fight up to the end of time. Ignoring the bitter most of limes, life will be a dime. To be without you that would be a crime, and Id rather not to the time. My bear, forever you will stay. Adding happiness and love, as we seek our dreams from above. Forever you are mine, if you don't see that then you are blind.

Pixel:

226

PandaSurvive:

can i get a star? :o

Pixel:

hmmmmmmmmmmm

Pixel:

idk can you

Elsa213:

Teamwork.\(\tiny\color{gold}{.^~•_* \diamondsuit .•}\)

PandaSurvive:

YAY, thanks cx

Pixel:

back to poem pls

PandaSurvive:

we are done though?

Elsa213:

Err.. I thought it was complete.

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