Question

My Song

Answer 1

Can you post what you have so far, love?

Answer 2

what is it

Answer 3

okay so all i have is the poem idk what to do and idk how to write a song

Answer 4

I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
The first thing I saw from my eye was you.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.
Since then I realized you'll love me despite
of any trouble that comes in your way.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
With you telling me every morning it was all right.
Taking care of me whole day, while you’re at work.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.
Since then our love have taken deep flight.
so high like a rocket reaching towards the sky.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
I remember the first time you taught me to write.
Taking care of me while you are working whole day.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.
You treating me like the flying kite,
Generous, kind and not getting angry for what I do.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Answer 5

So is this a song for your mother?

Answer 6

idk maybe

Answer 7

I don't think it has to be about a mother, just about someone who he loves dearly, who might be changing him and teaching him new things and is helping him get through life.

Answer 8

Well the way you are headed with this song it sounds like you are singing to a motherly figure. Which is super! The idea and lyrics are really good. However, you need to work on the flow of the lines flowing into the next. As well as the stanzas. They need to flow into one beautiful piece of work.

Answer 9

@MissSugarPink132 That's the amusing part about this song. You could interpret this as the doctor taking Sky home.

Answer 10

can you help me with that zowie?

Answer 11

Ofc. Just give ma a minute. Its hard going back and forth. <3

Answer 12

i understand

Answer 13

There are a few lines which are really sweet and touching. They would draw in the listener.
So those we will incorporate into the song one way or another.
-Since then I realized you'll love me despite
-Since then our love have taken deep flight.

It also seems as though, "I was born in your hand, holding me tight." is something you want to keep in the song, however, you should try not to repeat it as often as you have. Maybe we should try to repeat it before or after ever chorus.

Answer 14

I see that you've started the song with, "I was born in your hand, holding me tight." so we'll keep that the same because it's a great way to start the song.

But let me ask you thins, what do you want the message to be behind the song?

Answer 15

I think an important question, before lyrics and everything, is what genre do you want this song to be? Like is it going to be a ballad, or a slow song, or a rock song, or metal.

Answer 16

you need to find a song and a rhythm and then try to fit song lyrics in so you know what will fit and what will not.

Answer 17

I would have to disagree. Music should never come first. I would say when you write lyrics first it helps determine the right genre to put the music in. if you focus on trying to get the song to fit into a certain rhythm it could take away so much of the importance of the song. If the song doesn't fit in with the rhythm then the artist might have to take out a whole stanza because it doesn't fit. And that stanza could be the most important part.

Answer 18

in that case, you'd have to change the music and find a different place for that verse.

Answer 19

whats going on im confused?

Answer 20

@SkyVoltage43 They are debating whether you should write the lyrics or find a song first.

Answer 21

lyrics

Answer 22

Not necessarily. From personal experience when i write lyrics I focus mainly on the lyrics and the words. then after I'm content with the song I sing it how I like it to sound then I hop onto my keyboard and play the song while singing and tweaking it.

Answer 23

in all honesty, though, it's up to the writer

Answer 24

i wanna be able to play it on an acoustic guitar so idk

Answer 25

so imma need notes for the music to perform it too

Answer 26

Sky, how do you want to work this?

Answer 27

what do you mean?

Answer 28

Do you want to write lyrics or the music first?

Answer 29

idc

Answer 30

Babe, it's up to you. Don't let others make decisions for you. This is your song, so you make all the ultimate decisions.

Answer 31

Well, this is ultimately your song, love. If you want to make the music first then you make the music. However, I'm not good with making the music part so I won't be able to help you.

Answer 32

Agreed, Sugar.

Answer 33

fine then lets do the lyrics but can we please do them tomorrow my head hurts

Answer 34

good idea. School is almost over anyway

Answer 35

Yeah. Of course. We'll work at your pace. It;s your song love.

Answer 36

ok zowie you can write stuff and we can go over everything tomorrow

Answer 37

I can hold off on working on it until you log on. It's your song. I'm not going to just take it and write it how I want to write it. I need your thoughts and ideas. <3

Answer 38

okay well imma go bye see you tomorrow

Answer 39

Bia love. <3 Have a terrific day.

Answer 40

there are alot of replies here lmao