Question

Don't comment till I post the story.

Answer 1

My Horror story

There was a boy that was walking down a dark hallway. He looked bored and dull. Tristan walked towards the boy slowly and realized that the boy’s eyes had no pupils. Trisan jumped in fear at this shocking discovery, Yet he decided to try and touch the boy, just to find out if he was solid, or a figment of his imagination. Tristan reached out his hand ever so slowly and touched the boy on his shoulder. There was an eerie silence after Tristan touched the boy. It was a very unpleasant sensation. The boy’s skin was cold and rough. “Hey! Hey are you ok?”, He said to the inanimate boy knowing nothing would happen. To Tristan’s surprise the boy started to scream! Tristan stumbled back and fell onto the ground. This was no ordinary scream, This was a scream that maintained a single note. Tristan got up and covered his ears. He then saw that the boy’s blank eyes Started to glow and ooze a black substance. But then as suddenly as the screaming started, It ceased. The boy with the blank eyes pointed an accusing finger at Tristan. Tristan backed away a little bit because the boy’s finger was surprisingly close to his chest. The boy opened his mouth to speak, but the way he spoke made Tristan to bolt into a run. The boy started to run after Tristan speaking in a demented and distorted voice, like a broken record player. The boy said “You left me Tristan! You left me when I needed the most help!” Tristan knew what the boy was talking about too. Tristan looked back at the boy and looked at him for a good twenty seconds. Tristan finally realized who this boy was. This was his best friend named Oliver that he left in a fire 5 years ago. Tristan felt a few tears roll down his cheeks as he relieved that terrible day. He looked into Oliver’s blank empty eyes and said, “I never really liked you anyway.” After Tristan breathed the last word Oliver began to walk towards him threateningly. Tristan started to back away terrified at the thought of what Oliver could do to him now. Oliver was a small and scrawny boy who never had many friends. Tristan could easily overpower him before but now he could see that Oliver was no longer a small scrawny boy. He was a spirit of raw power. As Oliver watched his friend back away into a wall he said three words that summed up what he felt about Tristan. “Time to float.” Tristan Bursts into tears because this was their go to line for the science fair on the same day Oliver died. Their science project was a balloon that could float without using helium. Before they could get their project to the counter someone’s robot exploded and caused a fire. Nobody could escape anywhere because everyone was trying to get out at the same time. Oliver ended up getting stuck under a board from the ceiling that crushed his spine. Tristan saw that the door had a small opening that he could slip though. He looked at Oliver as he cried for help but nobody heard him over the commotion other than Tristan. Tristan looked back at the door and told Oliver, “Hey. At least one of us will make it out of here alive.” and took his chance to escape. Oliver sat there with a sense of no hope in his heart. He kept trying to call out for help but alas still nobody could hear him. In the present Oliver was closing in on Tristan and grabbed him by the neck. He looked at Tristan and Tristan looked back. Oliver squeezed as hard as he could and crushed Tristan’s windpipe preventing him from breathing. Oliver dropped Tristan to the ground and watched him slowly suffocate from lack of air. The last things Tristan heard Oliver say were, “I never liked you either… Loser.”

Answer 2

its really good.better then i could ever do in my life time.u should do another one

Answer 3

damn he never liked him o; noice story tho

Answer 4

It looks great even tho I haven't read it

Answer 5

It’s wonderful! Keep up your imagination!

Answer 6

Thank you everyone :)

Answer 7

Alright I read it and it's pretty good

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Downpour17
Thank you everyone :)
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NPPPPP

Answer 9

Tristan deserved it.

Answer 10

He did indeed. What a traitor.

Answer 11

Wow! :)

Answer 12

Ngl I got really into this story,btw great story bro-hope u write more soon.

Answer 13

I will. I'm writing another story now. It's called "vanity"

Answer 14

Wow, this was amazing. I would have loved more. I got so into it and then it ended, lol. I like the character building you did here. It really helped build Tristan and i really don't like him. A little more suspense would be good, but it's great. Amazing job <3

Answer 15

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @animegirl0
Oh yeah you sent it to me
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I really didn't. This was confidential till now. Thank you anyways.

Answer 16

you should write a book. your story is pretty interesting.

Answer 17

I am impressed u did good

Answer 18

Thank you sir :)

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Downpour17
Thank you sir :)
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Sir? Lol

Answer 20

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Downpour17
Thank you sir :)
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Sir? Lol
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I mean Ma'am... Sorry :<

Answer 21

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Downpour17
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Downpour17
Thank you sir :)
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Sir? Lol
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I mean Ma'am... Sorry :<
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Its okayy loll

Answer 22

love it! ❤️

Answer 23

Nice you did an epic job!

Answer 24

This is a rlly good story you should write another one

Answer 25

100/100 good job

Answer 26

Thank you :)

Answer 27

That was a really good story, good job

Answer 28

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BraydenLove
It looks great even tho I haven't read it
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Haha I feel that!

Answer 29

Great