Question

Is this poem good enough for some some one?? I wrote it my self. tell me what you think.
his sent is like the sun rise his eyes like the ocean his hair golden like the sun and his personality as kind as a child yet as mischievous as a teen even when he makes a mistake he always tries to fix it when other might just give up he always tries so hard to make others happy because he knows what it is like to feel like nothing he is my every thing he does not just make my day he is my day he is my sun that wakes me with joy and warms me through the cold from sun rise to sun set he is always there for me

Answer 1

Is he a blonde?

Answer 2

yes

Answer 3

his sent? or scent

Answer 4

scent

Answer 5

sorry not good with spelling

Answer 6

I like it.

Answer 7

sent
scent

Answer 8

I like it just a few grammar errors

Answer 9

when other might just give up

OTHERS

Answer 10

oh sorry I'll fix it
thanks

Answer 11

your welcome

Answer 12

the message is good enough for anyone because it came from your heart but fix the few grammatical errors and it will be perfect

Answer 13

when other might just give up he always tries so hard to make others happy
^ Them

Answer 14

thank you

Answer 15

no problem

Answer 16

when other might just give up
^others

Answer 17

thanks!