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what do u think of this:

Ruth Bader Ginsburg (RBG) Summary
by me

RBG was born in March 1933, her nickname was Kiki (Pronounced: kick-y) because she used to kick when she was a baby, and she has a brother. She enjoyed school, was a good student, and wrote left-handed. Her older sister died as a toddler with meningitis. She did not remember her very well.

RBG had to move from England to New York because of the war between England and Germany. She was Jewish.

RBG's idols were Eleonor Roosevelt and Amelia Earhart. She loved reading. She learned how to be a lady from her mother.

RBG did amazing in school because she got lots of A's in every subject. She took piano lessons and She loved Opera.

RBG learned how to cook, but it was bad when she tasted her cooking. Another of her idols were Helen Trent.

The war ended in England and England won. When the war ended, RBG's cousin Si was happy to see his family, but before the war started, he was super happy and fun, but now he was gloomy and RBG was worried about him.

RBG became an editor to her school newspaper. She discussed the four documents at her school. She took on world peace at her school.

RBG learned her mother had cancer. While her mother had cancer, she did her schoolwork beside her mother’s bed. Also, to get her mind off her mother so she went on dates with her friend.

RBG's mom wanted her, RBG, to support herself by doing good in school and getting her Diploma when she finished school. Her mother died in 1950. She stayed home for the graduation because she was sad about her mother dying.

RBG went to Cornell University and when she was in her dorm, she had things in common with the girls which were that they were all Jews.

RBG went on a blind date with Martin D. Ginsburg and had a great time with him.

RBG was a student teacher at her University. She was in love with Martin while she was learning more about him.

RBG liked her teachers of modern European class and her law professor because she liked both subjects. She decided to major in government.

RBG got engaged to Martin.

RBG graduated with an Honors degree. Then a week later she got married in the Ginsburg home.

RBG got a job with the SSA, but she bent the rules (a little bit).RBG was pregnant in 1955. Then in July the baby was born.

RBG got into Harvard. She had to run to the other hall to the women’s bathroom because the hall she was in, only had the men’s restroom.

RBG took notes on how to be a judge while reading a book. She could

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n't go into the study area in the library because she was a woman, so they let her get her husband to go in with her.

RBG's husband had cancer. After weeks and weeks, her husband survived the cancer.

RBG got rejected 14 times in 14 interviews to be a justice / judge.

RBG got unrejected from the 14 times she got rejected.

RBG focused on her book about Civil Rights.

RBG was serious about her work. She had another baby in 1965.

RBG helped the women and girls who were being treated badly at their school or work.

RBG talked about sex, gender, discrimination at a school.

The Law accepted woman for justice.

The Columbia Law school hired RBG as a professor.

RBG explained the objectionable stereotype at the Columbia Law school.

RBG was so busy that she could not take care of her kids.

RBG wanted the justices to understand the Law hurt many parents with babies. She was a well-known Lawyer and Professor.

RBG argued that the Law deprived defendants of Juries.

RBG worked as an advocate of change.

RBG became a judge.

RBG met with President Clinton. Then Clinton nominated her as a Supreme Court Justice*.

*Supreme Court Justice - The highest Justice of the Supreme Court*

RBG died in September 2020

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what do u think of my summary of RBG?

Answer 4

looks pretty good and well wright en

Answer 5

thx

Answer 6

Oh my apologies, its well written good jobb :) @KpopAsianDramaFanYT

Answer 7

pretty great

Answer 8

niceeeeeeeeee

Answer 9

I noticed a few mistakes so since you posted this here I’ll correct a few of them if you don’t mind. First lets start off by labeling the paragraphs so you can see what I’m referencing. Please note that I’m not trying to make you seem stupid or antagonizing your mistakes in any way. I just thought these revisions would help you a bit better.

1. RBG was born in March 1933, her nickname was Kiki (Pronounced: kick-y) because she used to kick when she was a baby, and she has a brother. She enjoyed school, was a good student, and wrote left-handed. Her older sister died as a toddler with meningitis. She did not remember her very well.

2. RBG had to move from England to New York because of the war between England and Germany. She was Jewish.

3. RBG's idols were Eleonor Roosevelt and Amelia Earhart. She loved reading. She learned how to be a lady from her mother.

4. RBG did amazing in school because she got lots of A's in every subject. She took piano lessons and She loved Opera.

5. RBG learned how to cook, but it was bad when she tasted her cooking. Another of her idols were Helen Trent.

6. The war ended in England and England won. When the war ended, RBG's cousin Si was happy to see his family, but before the war started, he was super happy and fun, but now he was gloomy and RBG was worried about him.

7. RBG became an editor to her school newspaper. She discussed the four documents at her school. She took on world peace at her school.

8. RBG learned her mother had cancer. While her mother had cancer, she did her schoolwork beside her mother’s bed. Also, to get her mind off her mother so she went on dates with her friend.

9. RBG's mom wanted her, RBG, to support herself by doing good in school and getting her Diploma when she finished school. Her mother died in 1950. She stayed home for the graduation because she was sad about her mother dying.

10. RBG went to Cornell University and when she was in her dorm, she had things in common with the girls which were that they were all Jews.

11. RBG went on a blind date with Martin D. Ginsburg and had a great time with him.

12. RBG was a student teacher at her University. She was in love with Martin while she was learning more about him.

13. RBG liked her teachers of modern European class and her law professor because she liked both subjects. She decided to major in government.

14. RBG got engaged to Martin.

15. RBG graduated with an Honors degree. Then a week later she got married in the Ginsburg home.

16. RBG got a job with the SSA, but she bent the rules (a little bit).RBG was pregnant in 1955. Then in July the baby was born.

17. RBG got into Harvard. She had to run to the other hall to the women’s bathroom because the hall she was in, only had the men’s restroom.

18. RBG took notes on how to be a judge while reading a book. She could
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First of all, in paragraph #18, you stopped abruptly at “She could...” I don’t know if this was an accident or intentional but I just thought I’d point it out.

Next, In paragraph #1, you state “She did not remember her very well.” I know that you mean to say that RBG didn’t remember her sister very well as a result of her sister’s death, but there is an unclear pronoun reference, meaning that who you’re referring is unclear. This can be accounted for as a mistake. I think a better way to rephrase it would be: “As a result of her sister’s death, RBG didn’t remember her too well.”

Paragraph #2 is not necessarily a mistake, but that last sentence is somewhat of a hanger because you just say “She was Jewish.” If you want to link that statement into that paragraph so that they’re better related, you could say “RBG was Jewish and as a result of the war between England and Germany, RBG moved to New York.

The third paragraph is not a mistake either, but the last two sentences can be combined in a better way so they don’t seem abrupt in the flow of your essay. Perhaps consider this: “She loved reading and she learned how to be a lady from her mother.”

In your 4th paragraph, you say “RBG did amazing in school because she got lots of A's in every subject. She took piano lessons and She loved Opera.” While it is taken for granted that if you do amazing in school, you’re probably getting A’s, there’s more to that than just owing “amazing in school.” A possible revision could be the following: “RBG worked very hard in school, and as a result, she consistently scored A’s.” The next two sentences act as supporting details to show her academic success, so those are correct. But you need to make that “S” in this sentence a lowercase letter because there’s no punctuation marks. You wrote: “She tool piano lessons and She loved Opera.” The “She” in “She loved opera” should be made a lowercase “s.”

There is a slight mistake in this sentence in your 5th paragraph. You say “ RBG learned how to cook, but it was bad when she tasted her cooking.” The sentence should be rephrase to possibly say “RBG learned how to cook, but she disliked the taste of her cooking.” Another mistake you made was in this following sentence. “Another one of her idols were Helen Trent.” The word “were” is to be used strictly for plural subjects, while the word “was” should be used for single subjects. So you should correct that to say “Another one of her idols was Helen Trent.”

In the 6th paragraph, your first sentence is: “The war ended in England and England won.”
This sentence is somewhat repetitive within itself. Generally, you should avoid using the same word more than once in a sentence, but it its a super short sentence like that one, you should avoid repeating words. Also, when referencing events in an essay, you should make it clear which event you’re referencing. There have been plenty of wars between England and other countries, and you don’t specifically describe a date that shows which war you’re referencing. So a possible revision would be “World War 2 ended in England, with England being the victor.”
Then in this sentence below, you repeat yourself too much, so it sounds very redundant.
“When the war ended, RBG's cousin Si was happy to see his family, but before the war started, he was super happy and fun, but now he was gloomy and RBG was worried about him.”
Perhaps you could find a better way to revise that, since its quite a bit of your essay and it would be better for you to do it yourself instead of me doing it.

I honestly can’t see any other mistakes in the rest of your essay. Overall you did a good job and it was very well-put together. Again, in no way was I trying to Antigone your mistakes.
Hope this helped a bit and sorry for being late by 3 days.
- Pusheen : )

Answer 10

cool:)

Answer 11

I like it. It's a creative way of writing and it's amazing!