I need help on my story! I don't know what to go to next/ I don't know if i should write about them running away from the creature that chasing them or something..

“We’re safe to go out now. But we will need to move the desk that I barricaded the door with.” I pointed out, sliding through the door and into the open room.
“Come over here and help me” I ordered standing next to the desk pushed up against the door.
“This is going to be loud” George said standing next to me, I turned my head to look at him lightly pushed in the arm then rounding the left side of the desk.
“Go to the other side and lift when I tell you to lift.”
George sighed and did as I said, awaiting for my signal.

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I need help on my story! I don't know what to go to next/ I don't know if i should write about them running away from the creature that chasing them or something..

“We’re safe to go out now. But we will need to move the desk that I barricaded the door with.” I pointed out, sliding through the door and into the open room.
“Come over here and help me” I ordered standing next to the desk pushed up against the door. 
“This is going to be loud” George said standing next to me, I turned my head to look at him lightly pushed in the arm then rounding the left side of the desk.
“Go to the other side and lift when I tell you to lift.”
George sighed and did as I said, awaiting for my signal.

rocfp · Answer

I would say next give him the signal, make it dramatic so it can attract readers.

Icyhot · Answer

Somehow, whatever they're running from should get in, whether it's an alternate route they didn't see, or solely overpowering them.

Monicasayshi · Answer

@icyhot wrote:

Somehow, whatever they're running from should get in, whether it's an alternate route they didn't see, or solely overpowering them.

ooooooo yes that's good thank you!

Icyhot · Answer

No problem

izukumidoryia · Answer

@monicasayshi wrote:

@icyhot wrote:

Somehow, whatever they're running from should get in, whether it's an alternate route they didn't see, or solely overpowering them.

ooooooo yes that's good thank you!

i agree ^^

tayjah · Answer

@icyhot wrote:

Somehow, whatever they're running from should get in, whether it's an alternate route they didn't see, or solely overpowering them.

yea dats a good idea