Question

Love By Me



Love is confusing
hearts broken, and tears coming
Feeling bad it was there fault
Making them feel a feeling they never
Felt Before
i don't what else to put or should i edit some words?

Answer 1

don't mind my spelling errors-

Answer 2

Poem, or song?

Answer 3

nice

Answer 4

Well it's a poem.

Answer 5

But it seems more like a song

Answer 6

sounds like poem

Answer 7

u want to add more??

Answer 8

Yes,I don't know what else and so far it seems like a song.

Answer 9

Because i also make songs too

Answer 10

I make poems and songs.

Answer 11

So it depends what it turns to.

Answer 12

yea

Answer 13

Its starting off good, I would make it rhyme just a bit, mess around with word choices. Would you like for me to provide an example?

Answer 14

Yes please @nettym

Answer 15

is the tempo slow or fast??

Answer 16

I don't know it's a poem I just have to move the words around.

Answer 17

This is my most recent poem.. I'm in the process of putting it together into a song.

Answer 18

That's really good!

Answer 19

i felt that bro🔥🔥

Answer 20

Nice! Makes me want to start poetry again!

Answer 21

This is a really good poem. I love it!

Answer 22

Notice how I had each sentence to somewhat rhyme. Such as "always smile : in denial"
I hope that helped give you an idea of what I was referring to :) @iimaddii

Answer 23

Also is it ok if i dm you?

Answer 24

Thats fine :)