Question

So i've been working on this song and idk what to think abt it

Yea lately u ain't been the same to me, u talk to me crazy, and it's weird tho, i cant let go of the past bc i love u bro u said i was ur last and to let go of the past but really i wanted us to last but ever since i let you go i been feelin real low, but imma g so i keep it on a low

(btw im a beginner;-;)

Answer 1

nice! work on your word flow better, visualize a river and imagine that the river is coming out using the words

Answer 2

alr tysm

Answer 3

mhm

Answer 4

nice work, i like it so far

Answer 5

@ luvvdani1516 Thxxx<3

Answer 6

@luvvdani1516 **

Answer 7

I thought it was good I even sang it to my nana and she thought it was really good and it was great lyrics LMAO

Answer 8

Yeah she said if that was my song i could be a song writer but she didn't believe me cuz she said u can write a song but not an essay

Answer 9

HA WE SHOULD BE BESTIESSSSS

Answer 10

that good

Answer 11

I LOVe IT it was rlly good for a beginner id say an average

Answer 12

Nice.