plz grade for me
welcome you no me I know you so whey do you ack like you don't it doesn't make seas to me

Question

plz grade for me 
welcome you no me I know you so whey do you ack like you don't it doesn't make seas to me

bivibes · Answer

grade?

Trickjoker · Answer

uh... please reword the question in a way we can understand.

0mega · Answer

Maybe proper grammar would make the song stand out, and make the song longer.

bivibes · Answer

bc if your in sencond or lower this will work

bivibes · Answer

but good job

bivibes · Answer

here ill fix it

bivibes · Answer

as best as i can

Rumers · Answer

um i mean plz tell me if its good or bad

bivibes · Answer

good

0mega · Answer

4/10, make the song longer lol

Rumers · Answer

okay

bivibes · Answer

welcome you know me I know you so why do you act like you don't it doesn't make sense to me

bivibes · Answer

there is better spelling < 3

iiMaddii · Answer

Also maybe add some ", " so it doesn't look all together and make each line spaced out
like
this.

bivibes · Answer

i thinks jsut make it longer and it will be perfect 8/10

bivibes · Answer

just*

0mega · Answer

yea, a run-on sentence with no commas, gives the singer no time to stop for breaths

bivibes · Answer

0mega did you rate my song part 1 ,2 ,3 ?

bivibes · Answer

each part*

bivibes · Answer

i have a coppy on my rn

Rumers · Answer

Welcome to my domain we are kings and queens hear we all know we are like angels in the sky the skies are blue and white we try are beast to rule well it's not about the money to us it's about the happens to them so why are we all was the ones to git shot down our love for them is fading fading fading FADING so why can't we just live in peace and harmony

0mega · Answer

@bivibes wrote:

0mega did you rate my song part 1 ,2 ,3 ?

I don't think so, link me in dm's

bivibes · Answer

ok

iiMaddii · Answer

Welcome to my domain we are kings and queens
 hear we all know we are like angels in the sky
 the skies are blue and white 
we try are beast to rule
 well it's not about the money to us 
it's about the happens to them 
so why are we all was the ones to git shot down our love for them i
s fading fading fading FADING s
o why can't we just live in peace and harmony

That's what you should do but, your lyrics don't make sense at all.

iiMaddii · Answer

You should re-word it a bit

Rumers · Answer

like what

luvvdani1516 · Answer

Try rewording this. 
Turn, 'welcome you no me I know you so whey do you ack like you don't it doesn't make seas to me' 
Into, 'Welcome, you know me, I know you. So why do you act like you don't, it doesn't make sense to me.'  
I added punctuation, corrected your grammar, and made this sentence make sense to anyone who may read it.

RomMosher · Answer

Just about to say "thought this got off topic" doesn't seem like it.