I wrote a poem and I wanna see what you guys think about it i want honest opinions please and thank you.

I hope your happy and that you've moved on
And I hope one day you dont think im wrong
But their was so much to say
Yet so little time
I no longer have the right to call you mine
Things started off perfect
We talked all day long
But you slowly drifted away from me
I thought it was my fault
I wanted us to last but you never seemed to be on
It always felt like you were gone
And I know you still like me
And i'm sorry for your pain
But i have moved on i guess you can't say the same
I wish you the best of finding someone new
The best thing I did was tell you the truth
I know i lost feelings and you still held on
But what we had is already gone

Question

I wrote a poem and I wanna see what you guys think about it i want honest opinions please and thank you.

I hope your happy and that you've moved on
And I hope one day you dont think im wrong
But their was so much to say 
Yet so little time
I no longer have the right to call you mine
Things started off perfect 
We talked all day long
But you slowly drifted away from me 
I thought it was my fault
I wanted us to last but you never seemed to be on
It always felt like you were gone 
And I know you still like me 
And i'm sorry for your pain 
But i have moved on i guess you can't say the same
I wish you the best of finding someone new
The best thing I did was tell you the truth 
I know i lost feelings and you still held on 
But what we had is already gone

Mylover · Answer

that's really good

Astrid1 · Answer

Good Job Mother!

iiMaddii · Answer

Honestly, That's beautiful , but maybe re-word it a bit so it would rhyme more, but other then that's its amazing .

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

I like it, it's worded really nicely, the only slight thing I have about it is the theme, it's not really creative since that's what most of the people on this site base lyrics/poems on, but other then that, it's really nice

alwayscutegang · Answer

100/100 percent good

kaleighh533 · Answer

@iimaddii wrote:

Honestly, That's beautiful , but maybe re-word it a bit so it would rhyme more, but other then that's its amazing .

thnxs for the advice

kaleighh533 · Answer

@kiwipop1 wrote:

I like it, it's worded really nicely, the only slight thing I have about it is the theme, it's not really creative since that's what most of the people on this site base lyrics/poems on, but other then that, it's really nice

thank you

RomMosher · Answer

Nice

kaleighh533 · Answer

@woofietehe

bivibes · Answer

i think its amazing

bivibes · Answer

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kaleighh533 · Answer

@bivibes wrote:

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i appreciate that (=

bivibes · Answer

=)

woofietehe · Answer

bootiful bsf i love it

kaleighh533 · Answer

@woofietehe wrote:

bootiful bsf i love it

thank you bsf <3

woofietehe · Answer

@kaleighh533 wrote:

@woofietehe wrote:

bootiful bsf i love it

thank you bsf <3

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montes67 · Answer

love  it! great job!

kaleighh533 · Answer

@montes67 wrote:

love it! great job!

thank you

Tyrion · Answer

*applause* its great new friend :)

kaleighh533 · Answer

@tyrion wrote:

*applause* its great new friend :)

ty :)

jhonyy9 · Answer

congrats !!! Nice !!!

bizaardvark · Answer

wow very good and meaningful :))))

kaleighh533 · Answer

@jhonyy9 wrote:

congrats !!! Nice !!!

thank you

kaleighh533 · Answer

@bizaardvark wrote:

wow very good and meaningful :))))

ty

Roseyrose321 · Answer

Very nice!

Fan999 · Answer

wow- thats good. I can tell you put lot's of thought and emotion into it!! Great work.

itsmehjay · Answer

Relatable.

kaleighh533 · Answer

@isabelfriedmannbells

boredfr · Answer

This is- felt- ngl

IsabelFriedmannbells · Answer

@kaleighh533 mommm thats sooooo good, i hope you get a A++++++++++++++++++++ on itttt love youuu mom

NoLuvRoss · Answer

rlly good

itsmeka · Answer

Really good friend!

Shinso · Answer

Just reword a few things but other then that amazing job

Lynix · Answer

why can't i be creative like that though? @kaleighhh you did a great job. Keep being creative!!

hitsmemaya · Answer

damn that goes kinda deep. great job.

Kkgm123 · Answer

Really good man. Just put the right kind of spelling for certain words

0mega · Answer

Really good poem, don't stop writing.