Question

I want to summarize my arguments

Answer 1

-topic sentence
-information/evidence supporting the argument
-summary reemphasis

Answer 2

The first way Zusak conveys the idea that people with power tend to corrupt good people during war is through the characterization of Hans who didn’t give in to the influence of the law.
The next way that Zusak suggests that in the course of the war, the law and government want to distort people with morals is through the characterization of Liesel and Rudy, who did not give up no matter what the law did to them.

Answer 3

Buff up the paragraph --- write more than just one sentence

Answer 4

What is the essay question

Answer 5

Human behavior during conflict and war

Answer 6

If this is from the Book Thief, I've never read that lol

Answer 7

yeah it is
can u just like help through the topic sentence and the evidence provided to summarize the argument pls

Answer 8

okay --
What's your thesis statement/idea? your point in this essay
You say the topic is "Human behavior during conflict and war"
so what is your answer to that

Answer 9

Thesis (What your essay will explain, prove, argue); In the book thief by Markus Zusak, the author uses the characterization of Hans, Liesel, and Rudy to convey the idea that during times of war, those in power might seek to corrupt goodness and it is important not to give in.

Answer 10

Okay, and with that thesis, you then have that big doc filled with the points supporting that


so what do you need help with- lol

Answer 11

I need to summarize my argument like the topic sentence into one

Answer 12

and then I need something Leave your Reader with an Interesting Thought to Consider

Answer 13

Introduction
- Hook or whatever they call it
- Thesis statement
- Brief review of evidence supporting it
- Transition to next paragraph

Zusak, the author of The Book Thief, uses the characterization of Hans, Liesel, and Rudy to convey the idea that during times of war, those in power might seek to corrupt goodness and it is important not to give in. Evidence that proves this are the following: (list them out)

Answer 14

Can you copy and paste the points that you've written on your document?

Answer 15

wait nvmd, you wrote two at the top

Answer 16

Do you have 3 points? or only 2
It's best to have 3 in an essay -- just proper

Answer 17

Yk, you could just copy the 2 sentences into your introduction after the thesis
Then when you write your body paragraphs, just rephrase that sentence, and then go deeper into that sentence

Answer 18

i have 2 body paragraph but 6 points and proof all together

Answer 19

You should have the same amount of body paragraphs as points
I suggest condensing some of your points into one

Answer 20

body paragraph point/ proof is 3

Answer 21

Yeah, so condense some of the weaker points into 1, so you can have a total of 3 points, and 3 body paragraphs

Answer 22

ok

Answer 23

so what about the summarized argument

Answer 24

but that is the 2 topic sentence

Answer 25

ok what about something Leave your Reader with an Interesting Thought to Consider

Answer 26

Maybe an interesting question or an interesting detail in the book?

Answer 27

ok thanks