I'm writing a song called "scars don't heal"
let me know what you think.

"i got tears pourin' down my face as i remember the last time we talked to each other

back then were a perfect couple

back then you said wanted me
but then you left me seven times
seven fold

you said you loved me
but then you broke me
seven times
seven fold

when i was down
you were all i had
to pick myself up of the ground

you were all i had
to keep me goin'

now your gone

(long gone)x2

you were everything to me..."

Question

I'm writing a song called "scars don't heal"
let me know what you think.

"i got tears pourin' down my face as i remember the last time we talked to each other

back then were a perfect couple

back then you said wanted me
but then you left me seven times
seven fold

you said you loved me
but then you broke me
seven times 
seven fold

when i was down
you were all i had
to pick myself up of the ground

you were all i had
to keep me goin'

now your gone

(long gone)x2

you were everything to me..."

Madiron · Answer

"i got tears pourin' down my face as i remember the last time we talked to each other

back then we were a perfect couple

back then you said wanted me
but then you left me seven times
seven fold

you said you loved me
but then you broke me
seven times 
seven fold

when i was down
you were all i had
to pick myself up of the ground

you were all i had
to keep me goin'

and now your gone

(long gone)x2

you were everything to me..."

Madiron · Answer

i forgot to add some things to the post

b1az3 · Answer

10/10

MADIRON77 · Answer

thanks blaze

Joe348 · Answer

it is great! and dont cry no girl/boy is worth the damn time :)

ahtzymackayla · Answer

That's honestly a good song and bruh don't let no one bring you down cuz ur an independent person :)

Icyhot · Answer

You are AMAZING. Music is a good way to show the world how you feel, and embarrass the person the song's about. You are doing GREAT!

XxKozumeKenmaxX · Answer

I really like it. :)

MochaBerries · Answer

i love thiss! 10/10

Parker06 · Answer

10/10! no cap...we all be going throw life issues....just stay up and keep going, because your future is more important!

Madiron · Answer

thanks for the support everyone

foxy44 · Answer

Umm good song buddy, but a you forgot to put something.

foxy44 · Answer

where it says "back then you said wanted me" didn't you mean to say "back then you said you wanted me" ???

Buenos88 · Answer

I really felt this song.

xWFLif3x · Answer

i really liked this<3 keep up the good work!

ihateschool69 · Answer

c0ck and ball torture

BrokenMoon · Answer

I luv it, perfect length perfect words, nice job sis

Madiron · Answer

um i'm a guy

jemayacorley234 · Answer

10/10

Killercrazy · Answer

awesome!

Shuki · Answer

I can lowkey relate to this, love it!

jemayacorley234 · Answer

i do to lol

EmilyHerron · Answer

I this super good, 10/10 keep up the good work!