Question

I love this peom:
Don't mess with me by Monster Angel
Staring at me with his eyes
I look at him cold as in ice
He looks at my heart
Like a bullseye target of a dart
Take your best shot
If you think I am so hot
But don't mess around
Go somewhere else and have fun
You cannot fool me
It will never be me

Answer 1

OMG YASSS THESE POEMS AREE SO FREAKING GOOD

Answer 2

Lol That's nice.

Answer 3

i love yalls poems they are so good

Answer 4

lol

Answer 5

thats awesome keep up the good work :)

Answer 6

keep it up ⬆️ you have the flow and that’s a good thing.

you need to use correct punctuations and spelling with your grammar, That’s all i have to say.

Answer 7

if you need tips just contact me in DM’s.

Answer 8

ok

Answer 9

I like it B)

Exquisite!

Answer 10

very good!

Answer 11

i like it

Answer 12

thx

Answer 13

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