rate my poem
idk what to do
to get back with you
our love is gone
so im gonna write a song
im sad tears are blue
all bridges have been crossed
i guess our love is lost
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XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:
i love ur poem lol
XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:
maybe make it longer
XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:
so i rate it 9..10
Astrid1:
Nice.
shalore:
thx
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BettyIsAwesome:
Its amazing!
brianagatica14:
It's awsome! ;)
CourtneyWatson:
ohhh its really good!
shalore:
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CourtneyWatson:
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carmelle:
Overall, it's a nice poem. I would encourage you to use proper grammar though. But besides that, its good. :)
shalore:
thx for the advice
Andreya:
its soooooooooooo bad in a good way
Andreya:
im jk its nice
shalore:
ik
your jk
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shalore:
If I'd never met you,
I wouldn't feel the pain
Of losing your sweet love;
I wouldn't feel insane.
But if I'd never met you,
I wouldn't know the pleasure
Of ecstasy's warm gifts
And memories to treasure.
Now moving on with life,
I force a wistful grin,
Questioning what went wrong,
Wondering what might have been