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shalore:

rate my poem idk what to do to get back with you our love is gone so im gonna write a song im sad tears are blue all bridges have been crossed i guess our love is lost

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:

i love ur poem lol

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:

maybe make it longer

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:

so i rate it 9..10

Astrid1:

Nice.

shalore:

thx

BettyIsAwesome:

Its amazing!

brianagatica14:

It's awsome! ;)

CourtneyWatson:

ohhh its really good!

shalore:

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CourtneyWatson:

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carmelle:

Overall, it's a nice poem. I would encourage you to use proper grammar though. But besides that, its good. :)

shalore:

thx for the advice

Andreya:

its soooooooooooo bad in a good way

Andreya:

im jk its nice

shalore:

ik your jk

shalore:

If I'd never met you, I wouldn't feel the pain Of losing your sweet love; I wouldn't feel insane. But if I'd never met you, I wouldn't know the pleasure Of ecstasy's warm gifts And memories to treasure. Now moving on with life, I force a wistful grin, Questioning what went wrong, Wondering what might have been

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