Question

Could someone spell check/grammar check this please?

Answer 1

I think the moral of the story is that a wealthy prize is never as easy as it seems, and a mistake can get you off track. I think that what the author is trying to say is that maybe a grand prize isn't as easy as it seems to achieve. And also with the time travel science fiction theme, I think that a deeper meaning might be, do not tamper with things that shouldn't be messed with. As the characters in the story were discussing, such as Mr.Travis, they were talking about how their impact on the timeline might be if they mess this up. The impact that Eckers makes and the dire consequences for it makes their effort meaningless, which supports the moral that I stated. Also I believe the wealthy prize is never as easy as it seems, Eckers goes into this mission pretty confidently as you can see by this motion where he decided not to the rip the check with the 10,00 dollars. This seems to be a mission close to his heart keeping in mind that he is excited for this kill, considering it's nothing that's ever been done before. Mr. Travis clearly states there's no guarantee that he will come back alive, but he shrugs it off and continues to go on until the final stand happens and he went off path and ended up killing a butterfly. This completely changes everything, going back into the future and this makes Deutscher president instead of Keith, Proving Mr. Travis's and Lesperance's theory of the impact on the future. He came into this past confident, and he just have may ruined a whole timeline. This theory of time travel has been used in many stories, reappearing in this one. This story may have just convinced some people, and the deeper meaning underneath.

Answer 2

I think the moral of the story is that a wealthy prize is never as easy as it seems, and a mistake can get you off track. I think that what the author is trying to say is that maybe a grand prize isn't as easy as it seems to achieve. And also with the time travel science fiction theme, I think that a deeper meaning might be, do not tamper with things that shouldn't be messed with. As the characters in the story were discussing, such as Mr.Travis, they were talking about how their impact on the timeline might be if they mess this up. The impact that Eckers makes and the dire consequences for it makes their effort meaningless, which supports the moral that I stated. Also I believe the wealthy prize is never as easy as it seems, Eckers goes into this mission pretty confidently as you can see by this motion where he decided not to the rip the check with the 10,00 dollars. This seems to be a mission close to his heart keeping in mind that he is excited for this kill, considering it's nothing that's ever been done before. Mr. Travis clearly states there's no guarantee that he will come back alive, but he shrugs it off and continues to go on until the final stand happens and he went off path and ended up killing a butterfly. This completely changes everything, going back into the future and this makes Deutscher president instead of Keith, Proving Mr. Travis's and Lesperance's theory of the impact on the future. He came into this past confident, and he just have may ruined a whole timeline. This theory of time travel has been used in many stories, reappearing in this one. This story may have just convinced some people and the deeper meaning underneath.

Answer 3

Well i found little small things but other than its great

Answer 4

Idk if you want me point it out tho

Answer 5

Delete every "I think" you wrote

Answer 6

and "seems" "might" etc.
hesitation doesn't have a place in informational writing

Answer 7

Also you said "Ruined"

Answer 8

I think it should be "Ruin"

Answer 9

The end of the sentence it has a comma after "People"

Answer 10

example of edits:
From:
I think the moral of the story is that
To:
The moral of the story _____ is...

Answer 11

As the characters in the story "we're" discussing

Answer 12

I also suggest you to only write one moral of the story that you're writing about, and write a clear statement, a thesis statement.
The rest of your paragraph should just be evidence that supports it.

Your paragraph is a bunch of things thrown together

Answer 13

He came into this past "confident",
idk but I just feel like you could use something different

Answer 14

wait u forgot the ly

Answer 15

You guys are both correct, this is a messy thing I threw together just because I needed it to be 300 words, but I don't want a bad grade so thank you guys for the critique I really appreciate it.

Answer 16

No Problemo

Answer 17

Lmk if you need anything else